Illuminati Is Coming - macKa and Tay Geezy
 

Tay Geezy Sin City

Enemies we ‘Char-&-Torch’, Rip Limbs ‘Apart-From-Yours’, Eat da organs and ‘Disregard-Da-Core’//
Bring da ‘Hardest-Corps’ we crush ‘Marks-&-Whores’, U still stuck in BATTLES how you plan to ‘Start-A-WAR’??//

Fuckk NESTLE we got ‘BARS-GALORE’… ‘Shallow~Minds’ couldn’t grasp our ‘Hallow~Rhymes’//
Seein da Site from ‘Sparrow~Eyes’, Most of you ‘Callowed~Guys’ was made for BONES like ‘MARROW’s~DESIGN’//

‘ILLUMINATI’, Implorin you Whores Are More like DRUNK DRIVERS coz ya fuckkin ‘CRUISE-are-SLOPPY’// (Cruise=Crews)
Fuckk a DANCE FLOOR, Exportin’ ya Corpes to dump off da Port is da only time we ‘MOVE-OUR-BODIES’//

Beg you chumps to ‘Start-A-War’, We “DUMP MORE PUMPS” than OVERSTOCKK CLEANOUT at WOMENS ‘DEPARTMENT-STORES’!//
Victims get ‘Scarred-&-Torn’, & we SKIM THROUGH ya verses quicker than da BORING ‘PARTS-IN-PORN’!//

macKa

Illuminati’ll bruise your army, calmly re-arm and leave fools departing//
Rhymes used for harming, off the scales like Jenni Craig so it’s useless charting//
Call me the bus driver, coz I take these fools to school so deduce//
It’s like I’m neutered, coz my rhymes can’t ever be reproduced//
So many people are behind my bars it’s like I was Riker’s Isle//
You like my style, it hypes the crowd and my rhymes beguile//
These peeps must be tossing my salad the way they’re spitting my shit//
I rip divine spits, split ya mind bitch dismiss your simple rhyme diss//
Leave you crinkled like Smith’s chips with spectacular vernacular//
Graphic raps tackle ya, defy physics, coz when you spit, you suck like Dracula//

Hot shit.... UPPIN THIS!!...........................

flames fasho nothin but fiya....who can fuck with it...???

1st verse was a 7.678/10
2nd was 6.372/10

Overall: 7.193/10

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1st verse was a 7.369/10
2nd verse was a 6.924/10

Overall: 7.0465/10
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fuck that shit, verse was at least a 7.2...

nice shit fam

nice flow, hard to say that ur not some
newbie off a free board, but u better
cut out those // and " and squiggles,
cuz u fucks up the whole peice, the
structure :/ dissapointing. nice peice
other than that, u still have a lot of work
tho.

Man, da feedbackk you get on this site is jus... well, I dunno exactly what to call it...

Thanx for da feedbackk anywayz ya'll...

Up...........

shit...thas some fuckin fire keep droppin shit like that

This was a very nice drop dog. Both of yall got some bad ass verbal skills dat i admire all the way. Funny and at the same tiime very entertaining, i give this ryme a 10 not because i'm kissin ass, but i know good talent when i see it. stay up

yea i had to read it again cuz its like crack