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fine mind Vs. Me
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You Spit First 10 lines max no c/v unless it's honest no d/r no h/v spit due 30 min. after check in... No feeding off verses.. check in asap... 3-0 is KO Battle closed by KO -strobe |
Atmousphere im gonna battle you again but this time doin it well/
so i'll start by sayin you suck like the lips on my ass ready to kiss/ dissing is my favourate thing, do absolutly anything for you to die thin/ better beat you quick, i'll break u up like jinggers, spreading my hate at you faggot/ your a human short of a brain, i'll cover you up n soon stain/ why the fuck am i to blame, when i told you your lyrics are to ova loaded/ of cum, full of shit and gung, im like a bee ready to sting, stick my ass into ya plunging, like my ass is pumping, lol./ i feed on your energy demolishing you quickly, like my raps sit on you like sum1 on a toilet shitting/ i'll burry you in snow, stop you from breathing sufficating/ kill your mum off the scene, jabbin a blade like i know what u did last summer/ transforming evil spirts into your sickened fairy tale story watch you apprear on tv, lunge my hand pull you grabbing/ |
?????Man that took like 3 days to post???why did u take so long???haha..u pre-wrote so much.ahahahaha
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lolz..sorry i took so long also..I jst rememberd about this shyt like 5 minutes ago..so here's my 5 minutes of wackness..hahaha...imma ko this nigga!!! Bitch, imma rip on u so easy imma make it look like a massacre// I'll make ur ass feel more stupid den how all of da animals were// Cuz of u there is finally a definition of stupid// Wen i use my bod. ta get boys, this nigga still needs cupid// This is gonna be da 3rd time that a newb gets wooped by a filipino// Cuz i ain't even tryin, comapred to his rhymes i'm spittin like da El Nino// Imma only use six bars and gonna beat this nigga easy// Hahaha..I think this is gonna be his 13'th lost..yes niggas believe me// Shyt!!He could be 1 foot from a nigga wit a gun and still would miss him// Hahaha...this boy isn't from london, cuz this nigga spits like a britain// Damn nigga, if rappin was a sin then you'd be hella sinnin// So stop spit'n, if RB was all catholics then u'd be a discrase to all christians// haha..good luck to u homiee..you'll need it |
Im gonna have to say Atmo won this the other guyt structure,Wordplay,Creativite and alot more was all of i think he needs to reread his verses before he puts them againist a rhyme
Vote-Atmo |
wow nice and wack battle evry1 loves those! naw just playin staright
fine mind : horrible structure fair punches ok flow need work on punches and flow and a lot on that wackass struture bestline: none YOUR SHIT DIDNT RHYME LEAVE THIS SITE NOW AND DONT LOOK BACK! OVERALL: *3.5* ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- atmo: hott spit nice flow good strutcure fair punches ok vocab work on ya punches nice spit though girl bestline: Bitch, imma rip on u so easy imma make it look like a massacre// I'll make ur ass feel more stupid den how all of da animals were// Nice opener but slow your roll dont get to cocky aight my vote atmospehere |
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atmosphere won this for rhyming, but the verse was a lot better than fines's anyway. fine, u gotta make every bar rhyme to get people to vote for you
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