Maku JaiiLiin vs. .Flows.
 

8-16 lines
no crew vote
no d/r vote
no h8r vote
no biting
no recycling
must post within a day(24hrs) of mine or you're dq'd

check in nigga

i'll spit first.....................................

aight........go ahead lets make it 10 lines...Ill spit when I get back home....Have to go somewhere emergency....But make it 10 lines or no drop this is not a check in

lmao, aight chump,(laughs at your fake emergency, g'head and get ya shit ready) but you still gotta post within a day of my verse

You know thats how we do makujaiilin. Serve em dawg.

I’ll use a tek to hollow ya mind//
you proud bout dick size, with heat I’ll take ribs, then make you swallow ya pride//
flames spit to you, disfigures ya face//
Who am i? I am what you can’t be, like my signature states,//
A cat who murked you, and is ditching the trace//
Itching to say, to ya fam at ya wake, bout how piss dripped from ya waist//
When this animal-man, mauled you to death//
Crushed ya body wit palms, like eve, you see imprinted paws on ya chest*//
I crippled you with a glance, you’re scared? I’ll run for you//
If you kill me, I’ll escape from death, return and come for you//**

*-the eve pic under his name
**-Speaking of The Crow under my sig.


let's go

oh yeah and for those of you who haven't seen .flows. text format, i just used his format against him, that's his font and he keeps a constant color...lol. is study my enemies, go bitch.

Ooooooooooooooooooooo Study Yo Enimies/ Den Elimidate Dem Ha Ha Ha Ha

comeone lets get some votes.....i beat him....he came weak if ya think about it

I wanna battle dis MAku jaiiliin

he got his nickname from a video game didnt he?...

lol I guess so.....Can ya vote in this battle....Who ya think won

uppin

breakdown:

maku: before i do your breakdown im gonna let you know that your gettin points tooken off for stretched lines




I’ll use a tek to hollow ya mind//
you proud bout dick size, with heat I’ll take ribs, then make you swallow ya pride//
^^bad opener and 2nd line is double the lenght of 1st 3/10
flames spit to you, disfigures ya face//
Who am i? I am what you can’t be, like my signature states,//
^^good punch 6/10
A cat who murked you, and is ditching the trace//
Itching to say, to ya fam at ya wake, bout how piss dripped from ya waist//
^^how piss dripped from your waist...??? but good multies and punch 7/10
When this animal-man, mauled you to death//
Crushed ya body wit palms, like eve, you see imprinted paws on ya chest*//
^^good personal stretched line 7/10
I crippled you with a glance, you’re scared? I’ll run for you//
If you kill me, I’ll escape from death, return and come for you//**
^^decent finisher not that hott tho 5/10

overall: 29/50...woulda got like 38 if lines werent stretched


.flows.

Nigga pay attention my flows seem like they leave ya with stitches....
Ground ya in ditches,He has no friends so he hang with goth bitches...
^^hott opener good punch creative 8/10
You simease fuck ya keep on fucking takin and bitin lines.....
Flows leave ya with fines He so into with me he even studies my rhymes
^^ok punch not hott 5/10
All around RB..Ya flows is seen...He cryin becuz im being mean..
Murk ya ass so much leave ya rainbows on ya computer screen...
^^list line gay 2nd line decent 4/10
stay poppin with cap guns not with nines..Level Down to ya fuckin size
Sayin "Dude" everywhere and giving high fives..Keep doing them untill ya paralized...
^^good 2nd line first line kinda weak 6/10
Wack People like you fuckin join german Cathlic families..Work on similies
But if ya ever up to a challenge and ready for anotha murkin dont fuckin study ya enemies
^^good personal about studyin enemies deent finisher 7/10

overall: 30/50

vote:.flows.

maku work on your structure its a lil off...punches were decent work on those too...you got some good wordplay..widen your vocabulary..flows. you need to widen your vocab too use harder punches and better wordplay/multies

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