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XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-17-04 08:12 PM

Lyrical Demon 04 VS XxToXiCXxVeRbZ
 
10 to 15 LINES
NO D/R VOTES
NO CREW VOTES
NO UNEXPLAIN VOTES
NO FEEDIN

30 MIN AFTA CHECK IN U SPIT 1ST LETS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Lyrical Demon = Big Man = Unknown Assassin = DQed.

Lyrical Demon 04 05-17-04 08:40 PM

Toxic... Yo raps are scam's, plots but with out the plan's
Im taken your land, this verse is destroy'n ya ram(computer memory)
This bitch gon bitch-less, his shit gon shit-less
You must have writers block, cause ya verse is gift-less
Your skillz are in a drought, So yo ass needs to frog-out
Hop-out, take to the cover page and log-out
You a newbie, comin in this game tryin to school me
Im a crime un-solved, no more for ya toons scoobie
You lost, its cold and yo ass is being left in the frost
We at work, Ya just got harrased by ya boss...
Attention, grabd ear-lobes this cat claim he heroa's
He aint pushin weed, this kid is runnin thorugh dildo's


Watch Demon Abuse This Kid, And Get Sent To The CPA...
Women Say He Dresses Nice...No Hes Just Gay...
Abuse Is From The Underworld...Well, Demon Send Him Back Home...
Ima Bust This Pussy...But By Guys, Abuse Is Used To Getting Boned...
demon'll Murder The Flyweight...Abuse Only Gets Hard With Men...
His Text Is Worthless...I Could Spit Just As Bad...Let Me Post Your Battles Again...
We Could Never Match Punch For Punch...Planet's Above Abuse...
Abuse's Verse Stinks...His Script Is Garbage...I'll Take Out His Refuse...
lyrical Is Known For Merks...Accept The Loss, Cause An Abuse Win Ain't Correct...
You're Barely Worthy Of Front Line...You Better Get With The Poetry Text...
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sorry i put more but i just had so much in my head i had to get it all out you can put more if you choose

Lyrical Demon 04 05-17-04 08:41 PM

Abuse Is From The Underworld...Well, Demon Send Him Back Home...
Ima Bust This Pussy...But By Guys, Abuse Is Used To Getting Boned...

abuse means toxic ma bad

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-17-04 09:29 PM

watch how my lyricsl go through ya Body ya; To bury ya with a hundred bodies on top of ya//
Your life's expired, you're on the floor dead with ya' arms out like ya tired//
My shit's crazy like animals spreading rabies and dead babies
And bodies wrapped in plastic, etrocities like these are drastic
Cut you open, shoved a spike in ya liver, your veins are like a river//
Blood flowing through veins like roads on a map
Open the hole..back of ya brain//
Perform surgery while you're asleep
There's no difference between you and sheep
You're dead meat, get your throat cut to the beat
Machinery dragging you by ya feet
If ya hungry you're dying to eat//
Choking on Alpo with a scalpel in your adam's apple
And a calico slug in your asshole
I'll put you in a chapel
Kid you should be careful fucking wit da buther knife
Pack of that will butcher you like a jackal//

Dead in ya project, so fuck ya block kid
You're like a possum that's being hunted and shocked
'cause a bullet in ya head is the object//

u da demon/iam like van helsing (seen da movie)/ shooting dem arrows str8 through ya heart// skin peelin off turnin to crisp/now nigga whos da shit!//

Lyrical Demon 04 05-17-04 10:10 PM

up dis shit

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-17-04 10:43 PM

Uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Know-Gimix 05-17-04 11:48 PM

Before I vote on this....does ToXiC have an alias named Abuse?

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 05-17-04 11:59 PM

Abuse A Name In Otha Crew Forums Or Something Else

Know-Gimix 05-18-04 12:13 AM

Yo for the simple fact that you copied and pasted a verse in here that was for another battle, and weren't even smart enough to change the name in the verse to the cat you were battlin Ima have to say--YOU WACK--- And give the Vote to ToXiC... Next time actually write a verse for the battle you in instead of copyin and pastin old chrit.

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-18-04 12:22 AM

UH OH sumbody caught you....U COULD BE BANNED! jp good shit 2 boff of yall

Lyrical Demon 04 05-18-04 12:33 AM

yo toxic i swear i didnt cheat its just that i had so many open battles on both sites i got ur name mixed up. that moron dosent know what hes talkin bout i put dat on my mama man i didnt cheat i have no reason to cheat i got too much respect 4 you to cheat.

Lyrical Demon 04 05-18-04 12:35 AM

i aint neva cheat on my mama i had so many battles i mixed my shit up dats all.i dont even know hpw to copy words

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-18-04 07:20 AM

Damn, hard battle to judge. Both verses were almost on da smae plain. Toxic had da better flow so he gets my vote. Good job to both MCs doe, and plz return da favor by voting on my battles below...

Lyrical Demon 04 05-18-04 08:07 AM

ok illl vote just know i didnt cheat

FiNal FiNale 05-18-04 08:20 AM

Lyrical demon get my vote because his verse made sense. had way more punchlines. i dont know if he copied, his structure mofo. complete from beginning to end.

toxic ya lines and syllables didn't equal up at all dude(being honest to deTH).KEEP ELAVatin.
both need work really

my v/ Lyrical demon

return the Fava

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123944


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