Upset
 

Ok.

The Anger Flows Through My Blood Like the Flows Off-My-Tongue//
Poeple sayin i Shouldnt be Upset u shouldnt Fret Ur-to-Young//
Terrin me up on The Inside My Anger has Reached its Limit//
My life has become Pressured Im strugglin to Hold or Evan Live-It//
I Take One step at a Time and Try to Rewind the Great times-of-the-Past//
But They were soon clouded by Frustration and Anger They-Did-Not-Last//
Heres were I need Motivation in My World so i Can Continue//
So ima Listen to what God tells Me "Look whats Withen-You"//

Little somin real quik

Aiyo...Figured I Would Go Off Yours...Hope Your Not Mad, Just Liked Ya Shit..

But Still I Continue, To Perserve More Herbs For This Life Journey I'm Traveling..
Mind-Ports Unraveling, With More Spored-Speers The Size Of Olympic Javelins..
Pray To God, I Keep Asking Him, How Much Longer Before You Send Me Signs..
Messages Threw Rhymes, Delievering Powerful Concepts Threw My Intellectual Mind..
But Still I Find, No Matter The Internal-Conflicts I Seem To Struggle With Inside..
External Emotions I Can't Hide, Fighting With Fury-Vision, Implieing That I'm Blind..
God-Gifted, With The Presence Of Life, With This Conflict I Was Blessed and Givin..
The Dead I've Risin, With Metaphorical Mission Wrapped With Visions That I'm Livin..

~R~

*Definitly Should Make A Collab On Audio With This...When I Get My Mic....Definitly Feeling Dis....We Can Make Mad Hit Off Dis Shit..*

I would do it i just need a Better mic the one i got was 8 $

Yea Me Too...I Am Saving For A 100 Dollar Mic At Office Max..It Was Syck!! LOL...Or Just Go On Ebay and Try and Get One LOL

I Liked Your Bars...Was You Feeling Mine Or Not Really?

~R~

I liked it.But urs was more Complex.Maybe if we do Collab ill add osme to mine.

Really more of open mics... but was still really good. Im glad to see some more poetry being spoken... or written whichever you want to call it... They were both pretty good. Just they are more of Open mics really. i just think that cause it had a set rhyme scheme and was set up like an open mic verse... with teh 's and the //'s.