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PLZ VOTE...scarface87 vs. dacrozofhb
14-18 Barz Strictly No Dickridin, Crew, Or Bitin Allowed |
So U Gonna Spit Or What?? |
CROZ is in da muthafuckin buildin ya heard
yo I've been doin dis rap shit since i was 2 you just jumped on da band wagon/ all u spittin out yo mouth is cum, i spit fire like a fuckin dragon/ Roll up, and smoke you like a joint/call up Joe Peschi have him fuckin kill you wit his ballpoint/ Scarface, u thank u got wat it takes, but u let me spit first dawg u already half-baked/ no need for me to diss you, come see me eye to eye and i got my fist to hit you, my gat's tip to kiss you, im sure ur girlfriends gunna miss you but wats another scar to ur tissue/ i walk down da street wit a marsburg on my back and a nine on my waist cuz they come in handy/y'all punk ass rhymes make me turn into a savage like Randy/ Shoot you, slit you i really dont fuckin care/ slit ur throat wit my mashetti like i cut my pubic hair/ u make Al Paccino seem like a fuckin disgrace/ i just buried a hole 6 ft deep time for u to goto ur place/ and if my shit dont hit you hard enough, and ur still able to breathe/ ill make sho that i take yo legs out, got u lookin like Christopher Reeves/ |
Say Hello 2 My Lil' Friend...
I Fuck Pussy So That Means You And Ya Blows Are Weak Cauze I'm Invisible And It Goes Right Thru I'm Watchin Scarface, How Dare You Interupt Me Now My Wordz Would Sting You Like A Big Venomous Honey Bee Fuck Goodfellas, I Rather Be Watchin Badfellas And I Spit Lethal Like Acid So You Better Get Yourself An Umbrella I'll Go To War With Like If You Were Alejandro Sosa, Dawg And I Smoke You After That Like If You Were In A Fog The World Is Mine So What Da Fuck You Doin Talkin Shit To Me Cauze When It Comes To Rhymin, I Should Be Compared To B.I.G. I'll Rape Ya Whole Style Like If I Waz R. Kelly Cauze Then I'll Fill You Up With So Much Gasoline That Shit It'll Be Leakin From Ya Belly And Now That I Fucked Up Ya Face, You Got Stitches Like If You Were Rockin It Like Nelly. -Scarface87 |
Now That We Both Drop Our Verses, We Can Just Wait 4 Da Votes 2 Come In |
I gotta give this battle to DaCROZofHB because he just came hard with his punch lines
Scarface, u thank u got wat it takes, but u let me spit first dawg u already half-baked/ no need for me to diss you, come see me eye to eye and i got my fist to hit you, my gat's tip to kiss you, im sure ur girlfriends gunna miss you but wats another scar to ur tissue/ "Vote"-DaCROZofHB |
hook up some votes ill return da favor fo sho.............
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yo croz took this shit he came harder......nice spit scar but your structure wasnt all there......good battle fer both tho.....
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croz just came out harder so I gotta give it to him. Scarface, you had mad flow though, this was a good battle, no doubt. This one goes to Croz
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Very weak battle but takes this becuz he did come harder....
both need to work on a few things and similies and metaphores.... which leads to balance.......work on them aight.......Keep elevatin v/Croz becuz he did attempt Return the fav Croz http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124905 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
So What's Up With This?? There's No Votes On Da Poll Yet, C'mon |
check it
croz- you gotta make ur bars rhyme, u had some aight shit but nothin great, just get that rhyming down and work on structure a little
scarface- u had an aight structure but ur punches were wack as fuck, honey bees? umbrellas? check out how to make ur punches hit harder vote croz |
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hopefully this will be fuckin adequate enough feedback for the monitors......
croz-good punches, needa work on ya rhymes a bit more, flow was aight but not great....... scar-good flow, wack punches you could do better bro, structure was tight, overall both need to elevate but good battle but imma gonna have to go with croz on this one.... vote-croz |
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