Izzie Dope Vs. Thug Nation
 

14 lines, due ASAP.

iight you spit first i'll be waiting just here to sign in

Have you never battled on the net or something?.. just start keying now and post when you're done, i'll do the same.. none of this you spit first shit.

look bitch..

with a name like that you must be fake as hell
I heard ya jaws been havin' a bad day.. so i'll make it swell
ya rhymes are elementry and thats a fact bitch
and i'd say the winners clear, but Izzies more of a black kid
fake bitches get bloody, do you follow me?
kid, i'll have you breathing through plastic like it was halloween
my shit gains applause.. yours gains nothin at all..
if you wanna see 'ugly stick', then tape thug to the wall
I was takin it easy to you when I started out..
but if ya step on stage you hear more boo's than a haunted house
especially cuz you wack.. I scorch rappers, in fact,
I'm gutter, like where they'll find ya corpse after the match..
you're so phony its transparent and see through..
I DONT NEED A LAST LINE TO BEAT YOU.

clear winner lines are wack. I stopped usin those awhile back. Ima vote though as soon as both are up

My first battle on rb now is he dope
break down your name like 1 week soap
dude was scared to spit first his weak verse
punches are played-out like a pair of converse
fuck punches my multi's immurse it cant be worse
should call your verse cassidy cuz it cant get no better
take apart your lines so i can put them together
talking about elementry you have no vocabulary watch the voters agree
my verse is an example of bourgeoisie while yours is just debris
10th line of dissing this fag izzie dope
stealing someones lines was your only hope
now its time for the voters to decide
watch my hidden wordplay on how i disguise (diss guys)

Thug nation man are u serious?
should call your verse cassidy cuz it cant get no better
^ That shit was a complement ^
All clownin aside i wasnt really feelin either verse. Nation your multis were forced harder than i seen in a while. And some lines were long as fuck, didnt really flow. Punches were weak on both parts so it comes down to structure, and im gon have to give that to izzie. He had the line that killed too
but if ya step on stage you hear more boo's than a haunted house
I swear i heard something like it before but dont remember where. Not sayin u were bitin just that i know the concept isnt new. This is probably both your first battle though so just get a little experience of how the battles on the board works. People are readin these so u have to change personal structure a bit.

My vote goes to izzie

Yo hit up my battle and vote if u can links in sig

alright thanks Kill this is my first rap battle ever and by that cassidy line i ment his verse sucks and it can't get no better lol

with a name like that you must be fake as hell
I heard ya jaws been havin' a bad day.. so i'll make it swell
OMFG...
ya rhymes are elementry and thats a fact bitch
and i'd say the winners clear, but Izzies more of a black kid
WHA?
fake bitches get bloody, do you follow me?
kid, i'll have you breathing through plastic like it was halloween
:0
my shit gains applause.. yours gains nothin at all..
if you wanna see 'ugly stick', then tape thug to the wal
WTF?l
I was takin it easy to you when I started out..
but if ya step on stage you hear more boo's than a haunted house
nice
especially cuz you wack.. I scorch rappers, in fact,
I'm gutter, like where they'll find ya corpse after the match..
ridiculous
you're so phony its transparent and see through..
I DONT NEED A LAST LINE TO BEAT YOU.
Damn dog... you the hottest kid I've seen on this yet... just damn and much respect.

My first battle on rb now is he dope
break down your name like 1 week soap
no
dude was scared to spit first his weak verse
punches are played-out like a pair of converse
Not super strong but decent
fuck punches my multi's immurse it cant be worse
should call your verse cassidy cuz it cant get no better
This is a compliment- and its pretty true
take apart your lines so i can put them together
basic
talking about elementry you have no vocabulary watch the voters agree
my verse is an example of bourgeoisie while yours is just debris
10th line of dissing this fag izzie dope
stealing someones lines was your only hope
now its time for the voters to decide
watch my hidden wordplay on how i disguise (diss guys)
Yo im not sayin you wack but dog there was no chance here....im sorry you battled the nastiest cat I've seen spit since I signed up--honestly... Good spit both of you but Izzie Dope is definately the winner here.... Please vote honetly on this to return the favor..... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124935

dude thats not even a good vote you said nothin about punchs flow or anything

Yo u could go bitch about it in battle forum complaints or whatever the fuck it is

im not bitching im just saying he didnt say anything about flow punches multi's or anything just said who he thought won

Yeah well u could still go there and say u felt it was an unexplained vote. If it was itll be disqualified. Same cat voted on mine but gave a pretty decent explanation. Thats just the way he breaks it down though kid. Seriously though go speak ya mind.

That's because everyone of his punch-lines was hott fire like dylan on the chappelle sho
Im sorry if I didn't get in depth enough for you, but it was easy to see his verse flowed better, it had omega omega punchlines, his wordplay was nice- I got excited cuz I usually read through 10 posts of wack shits in a row before finding something half way decent and this guy comes along and he was nasty as fuck-- Like I said you aint weak, its just none of your lines made me say HOLY SHIT THAT WAS CRUEL... where almost every line of his did... I hope this is more in depth for you... p.s. I liked the wordplay with disguise- it was a nice way to close.