t-storm vs blacksmith
 

rulez
house rules
blind spit
8-12 linez
verses due within 20 mins of chk in


t-storm wins due to blacksmith missing the 20 min deadline
-Cprogress

check ill be ready soon ..........................................

chk n drop
 

this cat fumblin n mumblin,get a mod to shut this shit-down/
before t swarms...wit ma words ima immerse this clown/
i cover him wit 10 linez of sick-spit till he cough n drown/
this guy wudnt blow hot...wit explosives in his back/
im gonna b packing nuclear warfare on this wack-cat/
u wana battle against me?..i murder more cats than ma uncle-jay-z/
dont tell me i cant rhyme...bitch im tha shoe that ur gona shine/
fuck this battle.. ma shits divine..i leave u fucked up after only ma 8th line/
ima drop a 10th give u somert 2 read in bed.../if ur tha blacksmith....
then im the lead, instead of tryina heat me up...warm up ya words instead.
:evilgrin:

ight check

Theres no hope for this choke artist, he just can cope with my death set..
get laid in death beds....cos ive seen more heat from kids making bomb threats..
whats next?you wont be able to tell...only thing hes expectin is his regular L's...
Losers dont prosper boxing with blacksmith was a stupid offer..sumbody ring the bell..
or just throw in the towel, hes screaming loud like rugby players screaming foul..
im hazzardis get your knees burnt with acid..im too far up the track with tactics
this whores facing my sword .....but stupid enough to retaliate with match-sticks
Dont you see my avatar bitch?.. im known to fuck with dumb kids....
beating my shit is the only time ull stroke a genius...belive im deranged
leave your mind rearranged..only storm hes dropping is candy rain....
yet again im faced witih nonsense, hes been cut up before he could breath AIR..
this beefs been settled with bars of metal like T-STORM WASNT THERE

uppin for the votes.........................
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t-storm

this cat fumblin n mumblin,get a mod to shut this shit-down/
before t swarms...wit ma words ima immerse this clown/
5 (ok opener)

i cover him wit 10 linez of sick-spit till he cough n drown/
this guy wudnt blow hot...wit explosives in his back/
8 (good hit on him)

im gonna b packing nuclear warfare on this wack-cat/
u wana battle against me?..i murder more cats than ma uncle-jay-z/
3 (you only wish jay-z was your uncle)

dont tell me i cant rhyme...bitch im tha shoe that ur gona shine/
fuck this battle.. ma shits divine..i leave u fucked up after only ma 8th line/
7 (ok line)

ima drop a 10th give u somert 2 read in bed.../
if ur tha blacksmith.... then im the lead, instead of tryina heat me up...warm up ya words instead.
3 (bad closer still no hitts only the one)

overall verse 26/50

black smith

Theres no hope for this choke artist, he just can cope with my death set..
get laid in death beds....cos ive seen more heat from kids making bomb threats..
9 (good opener and hits)

whats next?you wont be able to tell...only thing hes expectin is his regular L's...Losers dont prosper boxing with blacksmith was a stupid offer..sumbody ring the bell..
5 (little weak)

or just throw in the towel, hes screaming loud like rugby players screaming foul..im hazzardis get your knees burnt with acid..im too far up the track with tactics
8 (good line and hit)

this whores facing my sword .....but stupid enough to retaliate with match-sticksDont you see my avatar bitch?.. im known to fuck with dumb kids....
7 (still more hits commin from ya)

beating my shit is the only time ull stroke a genius...
belive im deranged leave your mind rearranged..only storm hes dropping is candy rain....
5 (Little weak again)

yet again im faced witih nonsense, hes been cut up before he could breath AIR..this beefs been settled with bars of metal like T-STORM WASNT THERE
9 (good closer)

overall verse 43/60

so as you see T-storn elevate

blacksmith keep on hitten

upppin before im outta here....good look t storm..
pz

IM think T-Storm was outdone here. I thought blacksmith had a good flow going. Both of the spits was good though. This one goes to blacksmith

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uppin this thread.................................

Multis=T
Punches=Blackk (barely)
Flow=T
Wordplay=Blackk (barely- not much in either verse)
Creativity=Blackk (felt da metas & punches a lil more)
Overall Vote=Blackk

Sorry T, I felt as if blackk was more on point jus barely on this one. Both MCs pretty evenly matched doe, good battle. Congrats to whoever wins...

Yo im gonna give this to T-Storm, coz even though this battle was weak i was feelin t's a bit more both cats need elevation. It also lacked practcally everythung else in my eyes (although i might need glasses) correct me if im wrong but anyways...

V/T-Storm

you black hit up my battle link in my siggy

yo that was a tight battle yall need elevatin though

This was a dope battle...Uppin this for my boy T-S

aight

open/smith
multies/smith
punches/both but more smith
wordplay/smith
flow/both
structure/both but smith slow down ya lines wun
finisher/smith

nice drops both yall
ma vote :black smith

ayo can u holla at diz battle wun.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125397