Mad Dog VS Fine Mind
 

Aight here we go heres the rules
15-20 lines
No crew h8 d/r votes
U first as u did the open callout
Verses due in by 12 noon 1 hour after that if u aint dropped
Good Luck & consider this my check in

mad dog dats very nobal of you to say good luck, but im battleing you dog am i suppose to give a fuck/
your an artist i wanna make fun of, kill the dog chockin with its own leash/
bitch im aggressive, i'll put you down in a twisting head lock, breakin neck in 2 till your bones poke out through/
im finemind spectaculkar, you mad dog, a fucked up bachular, gettin high off glue, snorting a hole glue stick up nostralls/
do i have to prove myself to you, fuck that, put a bullet shot in the middle of your head down/
the bullet hole splats everywhere even on ur mutha dress, who doesn't like you much anyways started beating you ova the head with her hand bag/
can't stand your stinkness, theres trails of odor, like i can see it in vision in fermal perspective/
you ever heard of lynx gravety, it gets girls and make your mini dick levetate/
mad dog you were born in da sewers, guess you are a real dog/
ugly looking, with moles the size of potatoes, bulging out on face, makein dem bigger in the mirror/
look up in your directory my names circled with this battle as my victory
you think your gonna be famous, you couldn't sell a record if you made a double album/
admit it fuck it, while this shits out in the open, i'll make this a quick death slashin opnin your neck./
opens like an freshly made sandwidch thats been stuffed and quatered/
lyrics that give you heart failure and need resusitation/
i called up two nurses to spare the resusitation/
fuckers dead gone gutted, brought away and dusted/

*Mind spins as Mad Dog tries to work out the verse*

Hold up hold up hold up...THAT was your verse HA oh my golly gosh how can i come back from that? Oh well i'll try...

(Verse)
Fine...ur mind...is so fucked up at times/
The whole point of rappin is that u have to use rhymes/
Not that crap u put out...doin that coz ur bitch wont put out/
So u practically cry and forgot wot ur about/
14 losses and 3 wins...they're strong signs that ur slippin/
I gave u luck coz u wont win...face it ur wack...so y r u trippin?/
U try to be like the boy who could fly...but u keep on fallin/
Perhaps u should stick to the day job...and quit wit the talkin/
And i aint gonna be ur ladder...coz ur only way is down/
Coz when the result ends me 5 you none...u better start shining that crown/
Like Mike i'll give u an iron Spike and send u to the ground like Tina...
After a fight wit Ike/
Syke this battles embarrasing i dont know why u spoke/
Better stick to watchin 8 mile...and learn how to choke/
Thats how u prolly got started...listenin to the Bunny Rabbit/
Saw there were REAL gangstas in the club and u ran coz u couldnt hack it/
Now i dont know whats wit the anger...coz u aint scarin me at all/
If we met face 2 face...i'd beat u till u couldn't crawl/
Now Fine Mind u outta ur mind...bet u wishin u aint spat/
Coz i jus done what it said under my name...I MERKED U CAT/

DAMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN that battle was great,

there was one clear winner in my eyes, that was mad dog cos hes rhymed better, flowed better n had better punches. fine mind your was pretty good but it was pretty borin to read other than that it was a great battle.

vote: mad dog

Yo aight lets keep the votes crackin uppin........

yo mad dog im gonna be back pretty soon for another battle, this next time im gonna merk u lol. but i aint ready yet...

Not a bad battle but mad won it easy, The problem with Fine was your flow is
well of your verse was well hard to read I kind of got board sorry bro..

Mad best punch
Now i dont know whats wit the anger...coz u aint scarin me at all/
If we met face 2 face...i'd beat u till u couldn't crawl

Fine best punch
your an artist i wanna make fun of, kill the dog chockin with its own leash

Should not have droped Fine
im finemind spectaculkar, you mad dog, a fucked up bachular, gettin high off glue, snorting a hole glue stick up nostralls

Mad didn't really have one

Vote Mad

Fine...ur mind...is so fucked up at times/
The whole point of rappin is that u have to use rhymes/

^^thas exactly what i was gonna say..

mad got this one..final had some tight shit but he would jus forget ta rhyme sometimes..REALLY fuked up ya flow..1

Thanx peeps keep em comin and plustwo i thought u learned after round 2 but u want another 1!?!...thats cool much 'spect to ya for that UPPIN

ok
 

it can only b mad-dog that gets this he had punches that hit personally,structure woz good,flowed well,u had wordplay....
up ur metas n multies......keep elevatin man...gud spit.........

ova cat- ur verse woz more like a song than a battle verse,structure woz well stretched ruinin flow...u had a couple of punches but they were weak,
u need to come harder than that n hit ur oponent wit punches,
u had gud wordplay..jus re-structure it n hit ur oponent n u will elevate
vote-mad-dog

Mad Dog had this battle. His punches were better, better rhymin sheme, flow was better, better overall verse.
Fines verse was alrite, whats this all about?...

...you think your gonna be famous, ''you couldn't sell a record if you made a double album''/

bitin off eminem?

v/mad dog

BREAKDOWN

flow...mad dog
punch...mad dog
personal/...tie
extra...tie
vocab...fine

good drop...fine you came out good...but it really tailed off...i didn't like the filler you had...but you're improving man

dog nice drop...try to have more personals...get at the kid any way you can... nice drop though...you're improving nice shit...

v- mad