Ma baby boy ( Feedback, plz plz plz!!! lol)
 

You can still listen to me//
While ur tryin ta kiss ma cheek//
I aint goin out wid no freek//
Ive got the boi I wana stay wid//
Im so glad I came out...and wasnt to shy and hid//
You makin me pop my lid//
Ma baby boy//The one im gna be wid all my life//
It gna be easy aint no strife//
everythings the same// Even out mums names//
We aint havin some lame ass relationship//
And it aint all cos I Wana suck his dick and he wants to flick ma clit//
Its cos I love him//
[hook]
Ive been searchin all ma life//
And now ive found him//
We never gna break up//
You can shut da fuck up brother//
Dont start speakin to me like ur ma mother//
sayin no boys in the house please//
Remeber to eat bread and cheese//
Hes ma baby boy....Noone can change that!

We out tongiht//
Eatin dinner in candlelight// We cant remeber the deffinition of fight
Just make love all night// And Im gna explain my love to you//
And I aint gna b standin deer actin liek a lame ass fool//
Cos baby I know ur the one

[hook]

To be continued......Well if anyone lieks da ting lol
xxx1xxx

Shout outs to ma real baby boi.. Rowan (aka oooooweeeeeeeeeeh) :love2:

yo lets colab an make a song together u down

yea all gd

nice flow, sounds like it more like an R-N-B track sorta over a softer beat, but nonetheless it was still pretty hot, would like to hear it if u put it into audio...

reply to mine plz http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...055#post1296055

thanks ill see, im a bit thick so ya know hehe, I normally sing not rap or mc though so I have a more chilled out softer beat :)
xx1xx

still wuz good gurl reply to mine thanx

prety good yo baby_grl dont forget about our battle iight but yea it does sound a lil more like an R-N-B track but if u down im sure me and the rest or the boys here can give u a lil bit about rap to help u elevate ya game ya kno byut neway hit me up when u ready iight peace..................

P.S. nice song

thnx :), yea ive posted in the battle, iv enever done one before so prepare to beat me 100%!! Speak tya soon x
Any more feedback please?????

~elevate~

shit was cool the flow was serious

kl kl