Your head is filled wid chemical overdose-_-
 

In ur head ur havin a chemical overdose//
All the words u say are goin over me//
It's all poetry//
Go climb that tree//
Wid da lil kids//
This rapbattle shit aint for lil kids mitts//
Take time back to were it all started//
O shit, I forgot ur already bacwords...ur retarded//
You try and getta guy but u dont cos ur cold hearted//
Your mum and dad have parted//
If youmess wid me ur body and neck will be in the same position//
I dont need to pre-orginisation//
If Iw anted I could please the nation//
Belevie it// Make it hapen//
O fuck it...Ill do some more shite later

Feedback plz ne1????????

iight this is more of a battle unlike ur last 1 but i still think u gotta up the rhymen skills a little overall not to bad........................

you already posted that verse i saw

lol ye ai know I didnt mean ta do it gain lol soz

uppin................

lol u should try to write a song but have somebody do some rap in it and shyt people like that if it is donw right let me kno if u wanan do it and we can do 1 together iight..........