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The one, the only, the Real...Thorough /vs\ Suspect187
Huse rules
No crew votes No ridin No feeding! 10-20 lines 5 bars. You textin first. |
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you spittin first |
I can and I'm bout ready to drop, you can drop first.
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Hey yo what the fuck this guy on a mega acid trip//
or that might have been his momma on acid who fell on a ugly fat dick// when she gave birth she claim it was a accident// But thats ok freaks belong too// even though pops screamed when he first seen and holded you// no wonder he never wanted you// So you started to rap but yo cant do that// I guess go back to what you were good at// and start sellin yer ass for crack// this niggas all whack to thinkin battlen me// this niggas now sufferin a major fatality// How can it be you had such a bright future// NOT yer futures crack, a freek, and beein a white wigger. |
Ayo Man After Me At The End Your Fucking Slaughtered -
Like How Jesus Was By Judas,/ Cuz You Never 'Come Proper' Like A Malnourished Eunuch,// Faggot, I'm Makin' Sure This Loss-Is-Fatal,/ Hoe Ass Need To Go Back To Lip Gloss-And-Facials,/ Cuz You're All Bout Being 'Friends' Like "Ross-And-Racheal",// But I stick To The Clit, Not "Dicks", But Niggih No Thank You/ Your Multi's 'Go No Where Fast' Like 'Gerbils On Tread-Mills',/ When I Bring Da Tec Your Head'll Be Like A 'Mechanical Pencil',/ What Da 'Lead-Fills',// Your Organs'll-Get-Lifted, Shot Up And Dropped Like Porcel-ain-Dishes,- I Spit Flows of Essence like Labyrinths-Of-Intellectual-Velocity/ While You Stay A Maggot With Faggots Stagnant-Ineffectual-Mediocrity// Like "MisMatched Puzzle Pieces" Your Punches Don't "Make-A-Scene",/ Follow Your Real Aspirations Of What I Expect Out Of You, Becoming A Make-Up-Queen,/ Maybe It's May-Be-Lene! Cuz You're A Homo Gettin' Blazed-Like-Green, Follow your Gay-Pride-Dreams, Cuz Rappin's Not For You Dawg Wit That Brain-Like-Beans// Sus-dick gettin Lined Up For Punches Like Fixed-Boxing-Matches,/ Nevah give props to niggaz, Cuz He's A Lip-Locking-Faggot,// You "Don't Got Glocs" The Only "Caps That You Bust" Are On Your Multi's,/ Which Use More "Force" Than A "Jedi-Knights"/ You "Can't See Me Dawg" like " Red-eye-sights,/ |
Aight now that the Real has texted let get some votes, I'm uppin for em........
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needs so votes come on ppl |
Ayo votes please the fav. is back at yall if yall need it, vote please, uppin for votes.
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Suspect187:
Flow: 5/10 Metas: None Multis: 3/10 Word Play: 4/10 Overall: 4/10 Real Thorough: Flow: 8/10 Metas: 8/10 Multis: 7/10 Wordplay 9/10 Overall: 8/10 Vote: Real Thorough |
Real Thorough gets mty vote easily. he lil suspect by way of k.o. why waste a good verse on this chump? don't know wbut it was a nice verse Real Thorough. try not to write so many lines next time b/c truly you only needed the first 15. other than dat you only need improvement on structure. nice multi's and pucnhes.
vote=Real Thorough |
Real Thorough wins this battle easly...........he took every catagory except for strcutre.......you need to work on your structre a little bit and after that you should be all good.......your pucnhes was hot and they hit hard......your metas was good and you had a couple of multis in there......keep elevating pc
vote=Real Thorough |
Suspect
Flow 7/10 Rhymes 6/10 Structure 5/10 Punches 6/10 ReaL Flow 6/10 Rhymes 7/10 Structure 5/10 Punches 7/10 v/ ReaL Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
lets see realthorough man u had a kick ass start and a kick ass finish so my vote goes to u realthorough.
check out this battle iight http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127385 |
Nice
Struc- Real Flow - Real Personals - Real Meta's - Real. nuff said flat out. |
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