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Action 05-18-04 01:58 PM

::..::Quick Multi Free::..::
 
Aight, Just Some Quick Shit For Yall To Peep. It's Short So Yall Peep It And Leave Some Feedback...


Yo,
I'm Quick To Leave A Phony Emcee Beaten And Twisted.. ~1
Spit Sick So Believe I Got These Cats Fiendin-To Listen.. ~2
Take A Hit Of This Weed God I'm Breathin This Shit In.. ~3
Got A Bitch On Her Knees And It's My Seamen She's Kissin.. ~4
Crush Ya Like Tick On My Sleave Have Ya Screamin And Kickin.. ~5
And I'm Itchin To Feed These Weapons So I'm Heavin A Clip In.. ~6
Lip Off The Police And Watch Um Use Coke To Season The Victim.. ~7
My Deamon's Is Trippin So All Opposition Left Bleedin And Limpin.. ~8



Aight, I'ma End It There Cuz I Know If I Make It too Long Cats Aint Gon Read It...

Action 05-18-04 02:29 PM

Stop Sleepin...

HeXen 05-18-04 02:32 PM

yeah ok...good mutis' ..but let down by the content of ur vocab and wordplay....wld have been soooo dope if only it had nice words...but not bad for a newb..u no wot ya doin..just work on the vocab bud..eat a dictoinary of sumfin..lol

7/10

The Juggernaut 05-18-04 02:48 PM

gotta go with homie...dont get me wrong..spit was sick...vocabulary is the key...you have potential to be the illest if you up your vocab....nuthin but love.....peace

Beyond Logic 05-18-04 06:30 PM

na fuck that if that was audio it would be perfect

hot shit fam

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-18-04 06:51 PM

vocabulary is da key??? get da fukk out of here fukkin white boy's....yo dunn ya free was hott dont listen 2 dem niggaz look at norega dat niggaz dumb but her signed with def jam so fukk dat vocab shit

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-19-04 08:07 AM

Yeah I agree, fuckk vocab shit. It's da punches you need to worry about. Ya flow was good, and had sickk multis, and I know you got punches, but it's plain to see you was holdin backk on em (coz I seen some of ur shit b4 wid crazy punches).

anywayz nice shit dawg...

Action 05-19-04 06:15 PM

Good Lookin On All The Feedback. As Far As The Vocab And Punches Go, I Was Really Just Tryin To Use Multi's But I feel Yall, I'll Try To Include That Shit Next Time. One.

Action 05-20-04 12:49 PM

Stop Sleepin...

*Tay.G*SinCity* 05-21-04 09:52 AM

Yeah, stop sleepin

Action 05-27-04 02:19 PM

Uppin 4 Feedback.. Wake Yall Asses Up RB!!

baby_gal 05-27-04 02:44 PM

sik, nufink ta elevate on..........dat was safe hun....keep rhymin

J-Burna 05-28-04 01:03 PM

man, fuckin heat!! multies were crazy, keep the shit up

Action 06-11-04 03:49 PM

Thanx dawg, appreciate it.


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