ma baby boy- HOLLA AT ME YA'LL, ANY FEEDBACK!
 

You can still listen to me//
While ur tryin ta kiss ma cheek//
I aint goin out wid no freek//
Ive got the boi I wana stay wid//
Im so glad I came out...and wasnt to shy and hid//
You makin me pop my lid//
Ma baby boy//The one im gna be wid all my life//
It gna be easy aint no strife//
everythings the same// Even out mums names//
We aint havin some lame ass relationship//
And it aint all cos I Wana suck his dick and he wants to flick ma clit//
Its cos I love him//
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Ive been searchin all ma life//
And now ive found him//
We never gna break up//
You can shut da fuck up brother//
Dont start speakin to me like ur ma mother//
sayin no boys in the house please//
Remeber to eat bread and cheese//
Hes ma baby boy....Noone can change that!

We out tongiht//
Eatin dinner in candlelight// We cant remeber the deffinition of fight
Just make love all night// And Im gna explain my love to you//
And I aint gna b standin deer actin liek a lame ass fool//
Cos baby I know ur the one

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To be continued......Well if anyone lieks da ting lol

it was pretty good and u def improved ur rhyming i was likin it keep it comin sexi...........................

ya^^^iagree nice job :laugh: :laugh: