Action Vz hydroponic_buzz
 

Rules:
5 Bars(10 Lines) MAX
No Crew Hate Or D/R Votes
First To 5 Wins


You Spittin First... G' Luck Fam...

Uppin 4 This Cat To Drop His Verse...

I'm Waiting...

for every action, theirs a reaction, you are action, i'm the reaction/
every move you make, i will react, every time you rhyme, i'll hit back/

my feat is to eat scarface wannabe emcee's/
i'll pull off a b.r.a.n.c.h. an' beat you with the tree/
i bet the closest thing you've been to a fight/
is gettin' slapped by yo' mumma every night/
when you fight you're like wolverine, without the claws/
cos' you scratch like a fuckin' queen, an' bite wit' you're jaws/
when we meet it's like a chemical reaction/
cos' i just absorbed you, every little fraction/ ...bitch/

Oh shit my bad I aint even know you dropped...

Okay,
Bitch Sit Back Cuz It's Actions Turn And You Gon Have to Learn..
That You Like A Plane Full Of Afgans You Gonna Crash And Burn..
This Kid Hydroponic Buzz Is Faker Then A WWE Wrestlin Match..
Watch Ya Chest Get Smashed, Ya Verse Fragile Like Text On Glass..
And I May Be A Newbie But Listen, I Drop Bombs When I'm Rippin..
Peep You'll See When I Blow Up Like O.D.B's Stomach After Prison..
Ol' Boy's Like Charles Barkely, Sunned For Most Of His Career..
This Degenerate's A Joke And A Queer Gettin Poked In The Rear.. (Ellen Degenares Is A Gay Comedian)
Just Take A Look At His Sig And You Can Tell He Loves Sticks.. (BRANCH)
And Someone Tell Hydro You Aint Tough Just Cuz You A Thugs Bitch..

Aight Now Vote Up Yall..

its fuckin embarssin

lol
dis iz a landslide ........who eva disa greez ill send a money order to dey crib lol

every Category:
act

Uppin 4 More Votes...

This Kid Hydroponic Buzz Is Faker Then A WWE Wrestlin Match..
Watch Ya Chest Get Smashed, Ya Verse Fragile Like Text On Glass..

that right there took it

flow: tie
multis: tie
punches: action
structure: tie
vocab: action
metas: action

overall: action

the verses were set up the same and everything but action is just too strong for buzz
nice battle

Uppin 4 Votes...

aight buzz I ain't really like your punches at all nuff said bout chu dawg

action you did much better in your verse than buzz did punches, flow
vocab, structure everything thanks to that of course you win this
battle no question.......

return the favour & do a honest vote on mine:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126013

Just echoing what everyone else is saying, 'cause they called it right: Action brought the superior wordplay, complex rhymes, and punches. I liked Buzz's line about pulling off a branch and beating you with the tree -- that was a good visual -- but he never elevated beyond that. Action had some nice references and didn't descend to the same-old, same-old level of nonstop dick jokes. Vote goes to Action.

action murdered him with better punches flow and vocab. vote here please
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126383

Uppin 4 More Votes So I Can Finally Finish This Battle...

action won this because of his punches hit harder and had better performance overall. I could read his more easerly because of his structure and flow was spot on and beat the other guy by his rhymes, multies and flow. The other guy did ok but not problebly his best rap, try better next time.