lyrical havok vs kelch~22
 

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spit 20 min after check in

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Please Vote Fair..

This Boards For Men Wit Talent, U Must Be~Lost or Just Week~
Ask Me? U Look Both Ways, Like When Ya~Crossin The Street~
Ima Keep~Tossin This Geek~, Break His~Spirit Then Stab It~
& Faggot, Get A New Name, I’m The Only One Causin~Lyrical Havoc~
U See My Flow’s Percise, Knife Point Punches Out My~Verbal Device~
These~Words R My Knife~ Always Drop ‘PURE DOPE'….
U Wouldn’t Be ‘Thrown Ta The SCALES’ If Yu Wuz~Gerbals or Mice~
~Serve U Ya Rights~ Like Cops, South Paws, &~Baby's With Sitters~
Leave U Like A 'Retard Eatin Those Kids In The Patch...~Basically Bitter~
(Sour Patch Kids)...G-Luck

damn u made me post fast as shit....wher u at?

my bad im at school so its hard for me to get on but here i got it

This kid beating me? hell naw, he's so bad it's devistating.
Plus, his "whackness doesn't pay-off" like "porn stars ejaculating.

Hitten you with text as if I was slamming my scripts to your name.
This kid must have a "leash in his throat" the way his "Spits stay tame.

Ill verses to split and kick this bitches Plain rhymes.
This kid's "Text Sucks" like "sluts with New York Times.”

His whole verse is coming up short as if he personified his scripts with midgets.
His "wins" are just like "him gettin girls phone numbers", "he's stuck with zero digits"

les get some votes fam..1

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Both versed was Hot! But I think Ketch took this battle with ease! He had better personals & punches!

Ketch:This Boards For Men Wit Talent, U Must Be~Lost or Just Week~
Ask Me? U Look Both Ways, Like When Ya~Crossin The Street~
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Hot Shit!

Lyrical H:This kid beating me? hell naw, he's so bad it's devistating.
Plus, his "whackness doesn't pay-off" like "porn stars ejaculating.
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Hot shit as well but alittle too basic but keep working!

Vote:Ketch

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iight here the deal this was an overall weak battle but my vote goes to ketch~22 he spit with better personals and tried a few multis that were ok.......
as for lyrical havoc ur shyt was choppy confusing and overall elementary no offense u jus need to do a lil work on ya game, u got some pottential, check out the forum that will teach u multis and shyt iight................

this was one of the weaker battles that i have seen from havok............both of you need to elevate alot.........

havok.......you need to not space your bars out like that......it makes your struture messed and your flow choppy and hard to read.......you need to work on rewording your punches so they hit better.....and BOTH OF YOU NEED TO DO PERSONALS.....they help out alot...p[c

v/Ketch..

hit this up
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=111538

Good battle on da scale of da verses. HAvok had some aiight lines. On some u seemed to touch complexity wid da tips of ur fingers and let it slide away. Da "SPIT" lines are kinda played now. But, nevertheless, it was a pretty good verse, but barely above average...

Ketch, not bad. U had some aiight punches, but precise flow. Dat Gerbals & Mice line was pretty good, but not all dat. Da Serve YA Rights like was nice doe.

I usually judge battles offa punches, but none were overly impressive. Ketch wins wid flow, and creativity.

Vote=Ketch

Congrats to whoever wins...

Breakdown:

Best Bar Of the Battle:

~Serve U Ya Rights~ Like Cops, South Paws, &~Baby's With Sitters~
Leave U Like A 'Retard Eatin Those Kids In The Patch...~Basically Bitter~

Most Played Punch Of The Battle:

His whole verse is coming up short as if he personified his scripts with midgets

Overall, This Battle Was Aight. Ketch's Lines Was Hittin Much Harder Then Havok's. Havok's Shit Was Kinda Unoriginal And The Flow Was A Little Choppy. Ketch's Shit Flowed, And He Had Some Hot Creative Lines.


VOTE: KETCH 22