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Ok alot haterz... the first thread that was posted by rzrshrprican was from my cousin. A lot of people don't beleive it ok. I'll spit something betta than wack shit that was posted ok im ready you judge if its the same.

A yo this aint rap city the bassment
im here to make a statement
thats why u face down kissing the pavement
look at all there faces, all the amazement
look what u just got graze wit/all the amusement, im laughing at you
you stststuddddering, u got no clue
who this cat is, and whats his purpose
not a wizz kid, but a lyrical genius
mastermind, ready for fame
saying the right shit that will change the game
look at my picture in the HALL of Fame
ur on the hall of asshamed emcees, u cant see thee, sick one
then i release the pain and sorrow
u want my rap book, no u cant borrow
please i wana flow like u
ahh but if he only knew
this shit aint ezy
mess up and cats looking at u all greezy
punchline KO ya ass :slick:
to fast aint even see it coming
you fall in slow motion
i got that KO potion
so dont test my skillz :shoot: :shoot: :banghead:

hated it i thought it was wack and needed siome major improvement and flow and all that shyt kid................

that was not good its noobish like its doesnt hav a flow......u hav 2 elevate