puertoricanelly .vs. X~ternal
 

No Dick Riding
No biting
No Crew Votes
No Un-explained Votes

As Many Lines As You Want

Verses Due 5 Minutes After Both Emcees Check In

Aight nigga heres my check in..............waitin on you to check in and then time begins!

Checkin In

We Got 6:40-6:45

Im commin at u raw,
like a fat lady wit no bra,
n i come like the chainsaw massacre
with my lyrical chainsaw
leave ya wit a blatant fall
recall yur ass wit my rhyme,
my nicknames taibo cuz i come double time,

and i thought u committed suicide by jumping off the twin tower
when i crash landed to blow yur ass up like a dynamite shower,
my rhymes so nasty they got u scared but its koo cuz u should B
i read my opener and had this cat callin HIMSELF a NewB

u gotz one minute

nice

Yo Bump The Bass And Pump Up The Volume give Me Einstien's Lost Equations I Bet I Can Solve Em...
Quantum Leaping Space Wit The Earth Still Revolving...
Using A Pen Or Keybord, Lan Line Or Mic Cord..
Reach Through Your Moniter An Slice Ya Wrist Pores...
Cut You At The Neck And Strangle You With Your Own Vocal Cords...

koo koo nice spit for 5 minutes homie i like it betta this way cuz peeps are forced to spit off the dome insteada writing some lines that they really cant spit off the dome on the spot but lets get some votes in here UPPIN VOTES 1

Aight Yo Straight Verse Uppin For Votes (first uppin)

flows-X
Structure-Nelly
multies-Tie
Balance-tie
Vocab-Tie

But x takes this becuz He came with harder punches.......All of the rest
Was the same for both....But for the most part X takes this becuz he came
harder with the punches hands down.....Nelly you aight but work on structure
a lil more aight.....Both keep elevatin
X- Return the favor aight http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124900

IM feelin peurtorican in this one (even though he voted against me lol its straight though) I liked the opening rhyme and he had good flow throughout the verse.

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same for me....even though he voted agaisnt me....But x takes this becuz of creative more

yo dey were sum ill freestyles, dey both were good 4 5 mins ting. i give my vote to X~ternal beocz i was feeling hes ryhmes abit more.
puertoricanelly i didnt reali like da 'n i come like the chainsaw massacre
with my lyrical chainsaw' line. usin da word chainsaw in both lines kinda messed it up xpectually in 1 line u say chainsaw massacre and den 2 da rhymin line u jst say chainsaw, it kinda messed wid da flow

True True.....Nelly Recycled....But x~Ternal you forgot to poll ya vote

uppin votes 2