just lookin for feedback
 

back in the day
i was slappin gays
faster then your mack can spray
hangin where the crackheads stay
beat em' when there lackin pay
fake rappers cant even spit wit us
its ridiculous, rhymes are hot like Icarus
to quick to touch
faster then your average
out classin and bashin you asses
im a throwback like Jason for the Mavericks
i'll put my fist where your face is
and then sit in the office while your ass is listin cases
i never pass class because of class participation
after this flow you will be in the ER for mass rehabilitaion

wack wack wack man u need to elevate big time this is deffinatley not that good at all iight.....................

hey u ^^^ ur so mean.... lol
i lykd da way it rhymed.. n it had a gud flo...