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Indo 05-18-04 10:48 PM

What IF??
 
I sat around thinkin about the strongest word in the world and I came up with IF. Check it out:

As I grow older and my days turn to nights
I often wonder what my life could have been like
What If I had taken that job out in California
would I know what china white go for on the corner?
What if God chose someone else to be a father
would DJ get the same love if she were his daughter?
What if I didn't smoke when I went to Rob's
Would I still wrecked my car & lost my job?
What if I didn't make the decison to be my own man
Would my parents finally understand?
What if I didn't choose Crystal over Michelle
would my life still be a living hell?
What if I was raised by my mother and dad
would I write about them in every song I had?
What if I knew then what I knew now
Would I still be who I am now?
In the crossroads of life people are put in a position
but once that choice is made you gotta live with that decision
In the times of stormy clouds and percipitation
One must act without fear of hesitation
What if facing adversity or percecution
would my faith be shook by threats of execution?
As I grow older and my days turn to nights
I no longer wonder what life could be like
IF.....................

Soul Sickness 05-19-04 12:44 PM

thats some serious shyt.....props man that is a really strong song man it realy makes u think about all ur choices overall really good................................

.::N-Sight::. 05-20-04 01:18 PM

yea real deep here...would be even doper with more multies in the rhymes


good abstract imagery


nice flow


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Xpiration D8 05-20-04 06:54 PM

Very nice concept, original
I liked it alot
Good lines, alot of realism here...


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