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flow2crazy 05-18-04 10:49 PM

here we go again
 
guess who's back, im still waitin for some feedback
is my flow so tight, that it make no1 wanna write
seems to me you cant find nuttin wrong, dude i rhyme better than you while im smokin a bong,
i been goin for a minute and im ready to step up in it,
so clean up ur act, cuz u bought to get smacked,
See my shit cant be touched even by an angel, so why dont you go back to school cuz i hear the bell
i keep kickin dirt in yo face, puttin you to disgrace
but u just sit there tryin to act like you dont care
when really i know you wanna sware, i know you cant bare,
the fact that im so crazy, and you... you're so lazy
pussy ass bitches be running for their life, but dont be scared im only coming for your wife,
i aint gonna stop embarrasing pussies fo a while, so you can take off that fake ass smile
try to put up a fight, cuz imma spit it out every single night
til i gotta deal, cuz you know my shit is real, and dont try to steal,
cuz ill cut off ur hand like u was a paki, whoops my bad i meant like i was an iraqi
but dont think i thought that was alright, you see im the one thought we should bomb them that night


Holla at yo boy Flow2crazy!!!!!

young beezy 05-19-04 12:35 AM

im sorry to be the 1 to break it to ya but this was bad n needs a lot of work, some of ya lines didnt rhyme n this was very basic some of ya lines were to long, it basically sounds like a first time ever writing song sorry but much love work harder n u will achieve more


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