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HoPe 05-18-04 10:50 PM

Wut I Feel Bout This Guy
 
This one guy i knew perminatley hurt me wen he deserted me//
This feelin he inserted in me made me want to have no talk concering he//
I loved him much less after da new things I've discovered//
I uncovered wut he did behind my back wit my own mother//
3 years together and for two years he cheated and desieved me//
It felt like his fake released feelins beated and never relieved me//
Never wanted to talk about him how his devoued power
destroyed da inner of me like wen i first seen da 2 towers
turn into a cloud of powder//
I gave him one chance.....but I still only loved her once//
That was all after I seen da people he was amongst//
My anger increased inside its like i've been given STD//
Always gonna have this disease, no cure for all da hate in me//
Everyday waitin ta be, and always prayen for peace//
Now i'm rake'n in greed, feelin like a racist haten believe's//
Da only one I trust is Jesus and maybe a pastor or priest//
Cuz from him i ain't feelin no luv, N startin ta smoke some good trees//
If u asked me to define loyd, hatred is da definition//
Now that he's gone from my life, there jst ain't no more use for livin//
After bein wit this guy, I've finally learned a good lesson//
Don't trust no more bitches like him cuz she stole my soul my only possesion//


lolz..this isn't dedicated to my boy..jst for fun..hahaha!!!

SpokenBluntly 05-19-04 08:31 AM

lol well damn that's some fucked up shit im glad it ain't about no one u knew..ayo good drop try to stick some mulitie's in there...but over all good direction and good flow *STAY UP MA*

Spoken B.

Soul Sickness 05-19-04 09:27 AM

damn thats fuked up shyt yoo props to that iight u got madd talent wit ya word a few multis would make that alot stronger though overall good shyt.............................................. .

HoPe 05-19-04 11:32 AM

thanx....uppin feed plz

baby_gal 05-20-04 12:52 PM

gd rhyme, nice layout, u got something good goin on wid words!! Hott shit, Keep em cumin man

HoPe 06-05-04 11:56 AM

uppin for more feed ppl

Tha Untouchable 06-05-04 03:44 PM

it'z nice but it could've been better (sumthin u said)

and if ya boy waz really like that then tell em i'll fuck em up

HoPe 06-05-04 04:30 PM

lol..nah..dis waz jst somethin i made up

$ike 06-06-04 04:41 PM

7/10 nice job


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