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lover boy 05-18-04 11:04 PM

nasty Em vs lover boy
 
10 lines...
no biteing...

lets go !!!

NastyEm 05-18-04 11:08 PM

chin chek homie.......drop first........and i will

lover boy 05-18-04 11:15 PM

I'm mixed with four MCs ready to spray/
2 pac,B.I.G,Em an maybe Dre/
when u run into me u might get cluck/
I'm shoot'in any nigga in my way not giving a fuck/
I didn't mean to hurt yo feelings G/
but u made me release the demon in me/
fuck shoot'in uh gun I can slit your throte with with my thum/
I'm a demon spirte who went through yo body and slice yo lungs/
I have a lighting bolt to give u a better flow/
I relax my fingers to give u a lighter chock,to yo throte/

NastyEm 05-18-04 11:55 PM

* smirkz*



Im like a horse race starter cuz i ~"blow toolz up"~//
cuz your memory gonna be "faded" like ~"Old school cutz"~//
Lover boy.....a rich nigga..try to ride and ~flossin da bliing~//
well ima "throw back" "Bullets" like ima ~"Washington Team"~//
u aint NO Pac or B.i.g , ur a rook,fuckin ~bastards gassed~//
im Dre in World HIstory , with more victories,6 period im wat's ~"After Math"~//
dis little chicken bout gunz, i see u've ~fell off a buck~( wat da fuck is a cluck...u mentioned it)
like an Egg Factory shippings, i send ~shellz off you fuck~//
my barz explosive like ive been writin many ~hourz wit Saddam~//
After dis battle ill make sure ill send sum ~flowerz to your Mom~//

muhfucka

Action 05-19-04 12:35 AM

Nasty Took This Easily. Just A Better All Around More Polished Verse.

Best Lines Of The Battle:

cuz your memory gonna be "faded" like ~"Old school cutz"~//

im Dre in World HIstory , with more victories,6 period im wat's ~"After Math"~//

Worst Line Of The Battle:

when u run into me u might get cluck/

This Battle Was One-Sided, No Disrespect To Lover Boy, Keep Workin On Ya Game Son, But Nasty Took This One.

VOTE: NASTY EM

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Da MaGiCiAn 7 05-19-04 03:53 AM

nastyem took dis 1

Structure: NAsty
Flow:nasty
Punches: nasty

Yo lover boy u acted like u loved dis boy u came soft and u made no sense and..it was maad borin fa real u need 2 elevate lil niga

Black Haze 05-19-04 02:09 PM

a yo dis wut i think

*breakdown*

lover boy

flow 4/10
punches 5/10
structure 5/10
rhymes 6/10
total 20/40

Nasty Em

flow 6/10
punches 7/10
structure 7/10
rhymes 8/10
total 28/40

Black Haze 05-19-04 02:09 PM

ma vote goes to nasty em sry lover boy








lolz

NastyEm 05-19-04 10:58 PM

3 to 0 im up.............................................

Beyond Logic 05-19-04 11:12 PM

nasty em, murder

im Dre in World HIstory , with more victories,6 period im wat's ~"After Math"~//


had the flow the multis the punches n wordplay

need i explain more?

DFrost 05-20-04 12:15 AM

Daaaaaamn
 
nasty, u gotz some skills kid, other cat- standard newb shit, work on it blah blah blah tutorials...etc nasty u killed it kid, mad shit u see vets spit in that

NastyEm 05-20-04 01:19 PM

okkkkkkkkkkk good shit das 5 votez already.........

kEtCh~22 05-20-04 01:24 PM

my barz explosive like ive been writin many ~hourz wit Saddam~//
After dis battle ill make sure ill send sum ~flowerz to your Mom~//\

thats how u close...murder straight up

Rising Sun 05-21-04 12:37 PM

I'm mixed with four MCs ready to spray/
2 pac,B.I.G,Em an maybe Dre/hmmm....
when u run into me u might get cluck/
I'm shoot'in any nigga in my way not giving a fuck/no........
I didn't mean to hurt yo feelings G/
but u made me release the demon in me/ok....
fuck shoot'in uh gun I can slit your throte with with my thum/
I'm a demon spirte who went through yo body and slice yo lungs/ok...
I have a lighting bolt to give u a better flow/
I relax my fingers to give u a lighter chock,to yo throte/nah......

nastyem
Im like a horse race starter cuz i ~"blow toolz up"~//
cuz your memory gonna be "faded" like ~"Old school cutz"~//ok....
Lover boy.....a rich nigga..try to ride and ~flossin da bliing~//
well ima "throw back" "Bullets" like ima ~"Washington Team"~//nice..a lil played out..
u aint NO Pac or B.i.g , ur a rook,fuckin ~bastards gassed~//
im Dre in World HIstory , with more victories,6 period im wat's ~"After Math"~//damn..
dis little chicken bout gunz, i see u've ~fell off a buck~( wat da fuck is a cluck...u mentioned it)
like an Egg Factory shippings, i send ~shellz off you fuck~//ok...
my barz explosive like ive been writin many ~hourz wit Saddam~//
After dis battle ill make sure ill send sum ~flowerz to your Mom~//nono....weak ending

this batttle is extremely one sided. nastyem took this for sure...cause he was more complex, better punches, flow, vocabulary, wordplay, everything.....the other dude seemed like he didnt even try....peace....keep elevating yall....peace


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