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$MOKESKREEN VS Pro-Rican
10-15 Lines
No D/r No Crew Votes Spit Due 20 Min After Mine No Feedin |
No doubt checking in..................................... :shoot: :huh: :laugh: :cussing:
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Intelligence sparks ya body’s outlined in chalk
All because this ignorant mothafucka wanted to talk You destin’ to lose I’m capable of rapin’ this dude You’s a joke Da Rican was born on April Fools Moms must be proud yeah u finally got ya degree Graduated “Top Of The Class” at “Dumb Ass University” Satisfaction I feel when I’m part of the action You wouldn’t be half of me if you was cut up in fractions Bastard ya lyrics are dead they put to rest in a casket Pass it along Rican needs help cuz you getting ya ass kicked Let’s go in reverse you nursed and u thought and you cursed Conversed and disbursed lyrics as you pre-writ ya verse I got a urge in me to give you some lyrical surgery You couldn’t “Emerge” on me if you had a medical “Emerg~ency |
You I'm going to smoke yo screen like being high off weed/
Ripped yo ass up like hungry after smoking weed after munchies/ Aint that funny/ Yes Its comical until my words starts hurting/ I spit shit precise…while you just blurting/ you aint native to this game but you really foreign/ grab the next flight and start boarding/ cut you up like a Japanese remake versions/ I can win elections against this dude even if I rocked Iraqi turbans// Drop those spits as fast as silicone tits get grabbed like sexual entertainment/ you hate me cause i can actually ryme instead of talking bullshit/ ya wouldnt have a hit record even if God was behind it// |
uppin^^^^^^^^^^^!!!!!!!!!!!
Good spit hommie i'm out fo tha night |
uppinnnnnnn fo some vote !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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smokescreen simply had a few better punches and his flow was alsomore on point, plus he had better punches.
vote - smokescreen |
smoke had better punches then his opponent
VOTE SMOKE |
*breakdown*
smokescreen flow 7/10 punches 7/10 structure 8/10 rhymes 8/10 total 30/40 ProRican flow 5/10 punches 5/10 structure 6/10 rhymes 6/10 total 22/40 ma vote goes to Smokescreen good battle tho Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Both these verses was ill to death
Wordplay-Smoke Punches-Pro-Rican Flow-Pro Rican Structure- Smoke Rhymes-Pro Rican This battle was hard as fuck to decide my V/ Rican he edge this shit out barely Smokescreen ya lines was hard as hell. i would give this vote a tie but u give a vote |
yeah yo im feelin both of em, I wouldnt want to say nething bad about either, but ima hafta vote so heres what I got....
Smoke= had a better, Opener and a better closer, and ultimately thats what has decided it for me... Rican- your shit was good too, had some nice punches and a good format nothin bad to say...close battle.... Vote= smoke *I got an audio battle that needs some REEEEAAALLL voters its -O- Vs SenseR the link wouldnt work so I cant post it... good battle.. |
uppin for more ppl to vote^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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Heavy battle...
Punches ~ Smoke Flow ~ Pro Creativity ~ Smoke Vocab ~ Smoke Vote ~ Smoke... |
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