Da MaGiCiAn 7 VS FreSh EmCee
 

10 lines
normal rules

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gud luck

heres ma verse:

"Magician" be wearing his "Outfit", with his "Cape, Hat And Magic~Stick" 1
Both me~and~you be "Seeing~Through" his rhymes like a "Bad~Ass~Trick" 2
Hows this guy supposed to be "Gangsta" when he's pullings "Rabbits Out~Of~His~Hat?" 3
I'm "Cutting" his rhymes to be "Permanently Shorthaired" like a "Siamese Cat" 4
He's got "Mixxed MC" on his "Sig" there on his "Respect List" 5
"Ghosts" cant see themselves in the "Mirror" so how u supposed to "Reflect~This?" 6
This guys like a "Wack Magician", everybody knows his "Secrets" 7
He "Used~To~Be Gh0St~MC" and got "Banned for Cheating",that left him "Speechless" 8
I'll ram your "Toes In Your Mouth" so next time u'll be "Unable To Speak" 9
And then you can tell me how it feels to "Taste Defeat/Taste Ya Feet" 10

Explanation:
Line 2: Saying that i can see his weak tricks (rhymes) and like seeing through tricks (chicks) trying to be nice juz to get ma possesions
Line 5: In his sig he got a respect list with Mixxed MC in it who got banned for cheating
Line 6: Basically sayin that he has nothin against me to diss me with.. and he aint allowed to feed off my verse.. so whats he supposed to do?
Line 7: Saying that people can see though weak magicians tricks, saying hes weak and i found out his secret that he got banned previously
Line 8: His old nick woz Gh0st Mc and he got banned for cheating
Line 10: ''Unable to speak'' meaning that he will be speechless after I drop my verse because he will have nothing to say..
''Taste Da Feet'' and ''Taste Defeat'' both work as one.. ''Taste Da Feet'' works well with the first line because it means he is literally tasting his feet. And ''Taste Defeat'' sounds exactly the same as ''Taste Da Feet'' so it all works round as one good punchline

gud luck, holla bak

^^^^ dawg...a little word of advice...don't make your "explanation" longer or have more content than your actual verse because it would get ripped on.


lol

lol aiight sorry, juz making sure ma point woz being get across properly

Damn nigga u got like 18 lines goin its big lol well lets see

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iight son check it check it dis shit was spit in like 5 minutes look...


IM maad tired i shoulda battled u hella later....
Dis nigga couldnt elevate if i put him in a elevator...
i'll write magician on your forhead so i Kno where i shitted...
if u get me mad i'll start bustin caps and u gon need a bullet proof fitted....
Ya 'style' wouldnt be 'dope' if u could Rock 'Coke'.....
Da only way u can 'Bust' a 'Cap' is if ya "Caps lock broke".....
If u think i lost this battle fa real you not Smart....
get me mad Ma tips be flyin out da toasta like Pop tarts...
its a (W)rap so i'll Foil ya bitch, Ma flow stay hot so i'll boil ya quick...
IM like a "King" wit a "Flu" cause im Royaly Sick....

its wack but i aint stretch ma lines so its maad short aand wack...wut do u expect from a 5 minute flow

iight dats it cause it was maad borin 2 battle...cause u took like an hour 2 write ur verse n shit...i took 5 minutes...~1~

who doesnt kno dat i got banned from gh0st mc?...dats cause somebody thought i was cheatin...Because me n Mixxed are brothaz...and ma freind chris signed up on his computa and den it said dat we was all usin da same user name but it wasnt true cause i aint Lyrical demon....so dat line was kinda wack....I call dat a Bobo move....

yo dawg u aint gotta explain y u got banned n who mixxed is aiight? its a battle lets juz let tha verses talk........uppin [1]

come on peeps uppin [2]

"Magician" be wearing his "Outfit", with his "Cape, Hat And Magic~Stick" 1
Both me~and~you be "Seeing~Through" his rhymes like a "Bad~Ass~Trick" 2


^^ decent opener

I'm "Cutting" his rhymes to be "Permanently Shorthaired" like a "Siamese Cat" 4
He's got "Mixxed MC" on his "Sig" there on his "Respect List" 5


^^ these are not hitting hard

I'll ram your "Toes In Your Mouth" so next time u'll be "Unable To Speak" 9
And then you can tell me how it feels to "Taste Defeat/Taste Ya Feet" 10


^^ DEFEAT LINES ARE WACK AND PLAYED OUT SINCE 4 YEARS AGO...that's an automatic loss


IM maad tired i shoulda battled u hella later....
Dis nigga couldnt elevate if i put him in a elevator...
i'll write magician on your forhead so i Kno where i shitted...
if u get me mad i'll start bustin caps and u gon need a bullet proof fitted....

^^^^ dats hard punch...but not creative

Vote: Magician...punches/verse was not as played out

Both verses were pretty basic. Fresh MC, no need for all them expainations homie! lOl... Your verse was no where near being too complex to understand.

Fresh MC had more personals so he gets my vote. Ya'll pretty much tied in every other category besides dat.

Vote=Fresh

Yeah.. Fresh MC had that defeat line which was semi decent. However, in order to elevate, you should try upping the wordplay... for instance having your foot in your mouth means something. So try to use that one line, than saying "so now you can taste da feet" in the next line... instead of just "cram your toes in your line" which is not only a bit obvious for the wordplay, but also not a great punch. Just off the top of my head.. you could do something like

"this kid predicting victory, but i got his ass beat
now he taking back his words.. so i got him tasting da feet"

^ that's not great, but at least it's a little cooler in my eyes.

anyway, v/ fresh.