Killah Bwoy Vs Mad Dog
 

iihjt lets go

10 lines
blind spit (jus drop wen ur finished ur verse)
no d/r cv or biting
no feeding
good luck

Aight another blind spit rules gotta keep em legit...uh huh Killah Bwoy good luck but its time u get bit...

(Verse)
10 lines aint enough to take out who i call this lil pup/
Mommy's been lyin to u ur life coz u iz mine heres my DNA...yup/
Aint no denying no point in lying ur my long lost child i was hopin 2 find/
And now i found u time to smack yo behind/
Coz u talk to daddy like shit...u like Will Smith tryin to put out a gangsta hit/
Dont spit ur not worth it...i can see u forcin words like........B-B-Bitch/
Oh no i've commited a crime...ive jus Kill-ah-Bwoy/ (Killed a boy)
Lemme fix the 'sitch' so its suicide u tried to deploy/ (Sitch = situation)
Killah u barely a killer i doubt u see murder believe its the truth i speak/
This bitch is a wanksta hopin to get signed by them ho's I.N.C/ (Muredr Inc)

Trust Me Dawg..Da Bwoy Will Put You In A flat Line-/
Kid You Aint Ill.. All The Shit You Spit is Half Mine-/
Packed With Nines put som'n on ya head and it aint ya Fitted-/
Kids Like Mike Tyson Cause soon as I drop a "punch" he already bit it-/
You MAD DOG? Smash Ya..have ya walkin with an oversized tampon-/
Merk You Quick Demolish Part of Ya Body So You Only Half Gone-/
Got you runnin faster than a black person in a horror flick-/
Make this kid wanna change sex..so its ova CHICK
Run Fast Cause Like an injured ball player I aint PLayin No Games-/
U Aint Known MAD DOG got kilt by DA BWOY is ya only 10 secs of fame-/



prolly my worst battle but oh well

Lets get the votes crackin up in here UPPIN.......

10 lines aint enough to take out who i call this lil pup/
Mommy's been lyin to u ur life coz u iz mine heres my DNA...yup/


^^^ nice opener..haha

Aint no denying no point in lying ur my long lost child i was hopin 2 find/
And now i found u time to smack yo behind/

^^ Funny...but coulda been HARDER and funny...would have made it a better punch

Coz u talk to daddy like shit...u like Will Smith tryin to put out a gangsta hit/
Dont spit ur not worth it...i can see u forcin words like........B-B-Bitch/

^^ YEA boyee..nice line..coulda hit harder...but creative..nice

Killah u barely a killer i doubt u see murder believe its the truth i speak/
This bitch is a wanksta hopin to get signed by them ho's I.N.C/ (Muredr Inc)

^blah...weak-ish closer



Trust Me Dawg..Da Bwoy Will Put You In A flat Line-/
Kid You Aint Ill.. All The Shit You Spit is Half Mine-/

^^ NO...this is weak...prove his shit is half-yours..ur braggin is pretentious

Packed With Nines put som'n on ya head and it aint ya Fitted-/
Kids Like Mike Tyson Cause soon as I drop a "punch" he already bit it-/

^^ Is this supposed to be a personal...I'm not buying it...it's coming across more like ur just on your own dick, bragging.

You MAD DOG? Smash Ya..have ya walkin with an oversized tampon-/
Merk You Quick Demolish Part of Ya Body So You Only Half Gone-/

^^ eh..decent...


Got you runnin faster than a black person in a horror flick-/
Make this kid wanna change sex..so its ova CHICK

^^ That was wack.period.


Run Fast Cause Like an injured ball player I aint PLayin No Games-/
U Aint Known MAD DOG got kilt by DA BWOY is ya only 10 secs of fame-/

^^ WEak...


Breakdown:

Flow Tie
Rhyming Tie
Punches Mad Dog..DEFINITELY

Vote: Mad Dog...i think u just arrived man


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flow-tie
structure-tie
punches-mad dog
personals-none
creativity-tie
enjoyment-mad dog

killa......i feel you just didnt come as hard as u usually do and you under estamated this cat......you should throw in personals if you had dun that htne i think that you would have taken this

mad dog.....good job on gettin this cat......props to you with your punches and shit

v/dog

this battle was aight both verses was aight the punches go to killabwoy, starting line goes to dogg, creativity goes to killa bwoy n i liked reading killas verse
v/killa

mad dog you killed him, i thought u had more punches and it flowed better so imma have to give it to you...

yet another person merked lol...

*breakdown*

killah bwoy

flow 7/10
punches 8/10
structure 7/10
rhymes 8/10
total 30/40

mad dog

flow 5/10
punches 6/10
structure 7/0
rhymes 6/10
total 24/40

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Best Line Of The Battle:

Oh no i've commited a crime...ive jus Kill-ah-Bwoy/ (Killed a boy)

^^Not A Hot Line, But The Only Wordplay I Saw In The Whole Battle. This Battle Lacked The Punches, Creativity, And Wordplay That Makes Battles Hot. It Was Aight I Guess. Yall Was Pretty Even, But I Liked Mad Dog's A Lil Better. Bwoy Started Of Good Wit The Multis And Flow, But Then fell Off. I Think Mad Dog Won But It Was Close.

VOTE: MAD DOG

^^^ what battle were u reading>, aiyo, MAD, I'd contest that last vote if I were you...

check it
 

killah had the metas and punches, he killed it was no contest

mad dog, u had some weak lines, only hot shit you did was the will smith line that was funny as hell, if you had more lines like that u mighta pulled it off

vote killah

^^^ LMAO @ deez votes...nebody with 2 eyes can see Killa ain't have no fuckin punches


hahaha...daz coo my man jus need 1 more to lay this shit to rest


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vote=Killa

Nice verses from each, but Killa's punches hit harder. His flow was a lil easier to follow too. Good job to both MCz, and congrats to whoever wins... Plz return da favor wid an honest vote (link below)...

killah you were absolutely right when u said this was your worst verse ever...the only thing i saw in ya verse was wordplay your punches were half assed...looked like u didnt put much effort into this battle...

hottest bar:Trust Me Dawg..Da Bwoy Will Put You In A flat Line-/
Kid You Aint Ill.. All The Shit You Spit is Half Mine-/

weakest bar: your last 2 bars were pretty bad

overall: 5/10

mad dog you didnt come too hott either but u had punches and personals that were pretty hott....everything flowed well...need better usage of wordplay and multies...structure was decent...

best bar:Oh no i've commited a crime...ive jus Kill-ah-Bwoy/ (Killed a boy)
Lemme fix the 'sitch' so its suicide u tried to deploy/

worst bar :Aint no denying no point in lying ur my long lost child i was hopin 2 find/
And now i found u time to smack yo behind/

overall:5.5/10

vote: mad dog an upset win for you....killah u definately should have won this but u came weak...mad dog took this battle with his best bar if he hadnt thrown that this would have been an even closer battle and killah u prolly would have won but my vote is for mad dog

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