*Tay.G*SinCity* vs fine mind
 

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Tj is the new rap battles new looser... the rappers sickened got a mental desease/
im bitchin with your wife in bed... shes givin a bj and can't stop suckin my dick/
no insults about dicks... cuz we all know yours is smaller den mine/
i'll spread my words like verbal manuer... that eventually sticks and stains you/
no gettin rid of the smell... it'll be like a skunk letting one off/
that means washing for a whole week... the smell will make you devorce in a day/
i saw your five wins... pretty lucky for an amature wannabe in the rap game for 5 days/
the flows will knock you into the sea atlantic... freezing away like jack in titanic/
shut down your system breaking dropping your temprature... putting you into a deep coma/

sorry for duplicating it. That was an accident when tryin to change the font.

damn fine mind u really need to fix ya structure doggy talk to flow intelligent or valor or sumbody lolz cuz it looks like u dont even b rhymin

Fuckk boxin I’m Cockkin da Glockk, & Poppin wid Shots dat’s 'Droppin-You'!!//
Thought ya Pops was a ROOSTER but dat still don’t explain all da 'COCKK-In-You'!!//

U spittin Suicide-Rhymes, might I suggest you get live & Bite-Minez//
I'll GRIND Ya BRAIN to DUST & SPRINKLES so u can Finally have a 'FINE-MIND'!//

*Let's Turn It Up A Notch!*

Get off ma Fuckkin-Rec & Come-Wid-Sense before Sumthin Ruptures-Ya-Head//
Ya Nuthin,-Ya-Dead! I'll roll ya EYES in ma WEED so u can SEE my "SUCKK"-"CESS"!!//

Tay's an Amatuer? Pleaze! I Ravage-A-Beat, Leave Rappers-Deceased, jus a Savage-Wid-Speech!//
Raps cause Organic-Disease, & I'll put "6" in your "TEMPLE" like a 'SATANIC-PREIST'!!// KO

I'll rip out my VEINS & STRANGLE u widdem, u still couldn't "HANG"-Wid-Ma-"FLOW"//
And like "SLOW" SPINNING CEILING APPLIANCES, nigga, u really a "FAN"-On-Da-"LOW"!!// KO!!!!!!

No contest...

PLZ VOTE FAIR... NO D/RS

Tay's an Amatuer? Pleaze! I Ravage-A-Beat, Leave Rappers-Deceased, jus a Savage-Wid-Speech!//
Raps cause Organic-Disease, & I'll put "6" in your "TEMPLE" like a 'SATANIC-PREIST'!!// KO

damn^^^ Tay Got This..

Other Dude Seems Ta Stop Rhymin all the time...Tay's scheme was more complex..metas..wordplay..all around betta..1

Hottest Bars Of the Battle:

Fuckk boxin I’m Cockkin da Glockk, & Poppin wid Shots dat’s 'Droppin-You'!!//
Thought ya Pops was a ROOSTER but dat still don’t explain all da 'COCKK-In-You'!!//

U spittin Suicide-Rhymes, might I suggest you get live & Bite-Minez//
I'll GRIND Ya BRAIN to DUST & SPRINKLES so u can Finally have a 'FINE-MIND'!//


^^Truthfully, That Alone Crushed Fine Mind's Verse. Fine's Verse Was Aight, but Tay's Was Just Flat Out Better. Tay Took Basically Every Category.

VOTE: TAY G

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OMG Tayg Wisn Thiz Easily Everything From Flow Punches Multis

Fine Mind Try And Be More Complex

Tay Had better punches & wordplay! Fine mind need to elevate his skills! TayG basic took this battle with ease in my opinion. Find Mind had some nice punches but not enough to win this battle! But Find Mind stay up aight!

Vote: TayG

Flow: Tay
Structure: Tay
Punches: tay
rhymes: TAY!!!
multies: tay

vote goes 2 tay...jus for the simple fact dat every part of his verse was bettah den fine mind....even if he didnt type anything i woulda voted fo him lolz