KiNg SoLo vs. Black Thief
 

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10 lines max.
30 mins max.
no d/r
no crew
no hate
blind spit [***SO NO FEEDIN IF I DROP B4 U***]

Let's do this!!!

aiight you spittin first or what?

its blind spit
we both spit at the same time playa
so get ure shit down
i'll extend tha time tho
we got 45mins max startin now!!

King Solo...Ill kill you and ya whole crew roster
Have ya brains on the street resemblin pasta
This nigga couldnt blow even if he was breakin wind
Couldn't rob a win from me even if he was breakin in
you whack...better make ya pen make amends
Or Ill leave ya as the only 18 year old wearin Depends
Solo King of losses....no one can top that
I'd murder ya wit only one bar even fought back
And its no competition...Ill easily murder ya in reptition
Heed my premonitions...you better treat my flow like superstitions

line 8 should be "even if ya fought back"

yo you said blind spit....you editing or sumthin?drop yo...you said u would drop right after me

ya niggaz need to hurry up n battle already

sorry playa
had to pick my bro up from school

i'll drop in like 5 minutes
sorry man

You won’t see my destructiveness comin cuz I always ‘conceal-my-mines’
No wonder they call u tha Black Thief, bitch always tryin to ‘steal-my-lines’
I’ll snap ure neck have ure head spinnin like the fuckin exorcist bitch
Bust ure nose givin u double vision so u won’t know which King is which
This King is bout to ‘blast-out’ beat u so bad ure wack ass will be ‘quittin-rap’
Call this damn bitch ‘ass-mouth’ cuz he got a PHD in always ‘spittin-crap’
Wack MC’s I detest so takin u out of the rap game is my current quest
*CLICK* *BOOM* my 12-Gauge flow leaves a fuckin hole in ure chest
U scared I’m ‘detectin-chills’ I accepted this battle fuckin ‘expectin-skillz’
Like a drug I be ‘injectin-killz’ u shud leave and stick to ‘collectin-billz’
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breakdown:


black thief:

King Solo...Ill kill you and ya whole crew roster
Have ya brains on the street resemblin pasta
^^hott opener 7/10
This nigga couldnt blow even if he was breakin wind
Couldn't rob a win from me even if he was breakin in
^^another hott punch 7/10
you whack...better make ya pen make amends
Or Ill leave ya as the only 18 year old wearin Depends
^^nice punch 6/10
Solo King of losses....no one can top that
I'd murder ya wit only one bar even fought back
^^didnt make sense till i read the next post decent punch 5/10
And its no competition...Ill easily murder ya in reptition
Heed my premonitions...you better treat my flow like superstitions
^^that was straight but multies dont worl for you 5/10

overall: 30/50 (60%)

king solo:



You won’t see my destructiveness comin cuz I always ‘conceal-my-mines’
No wonder they call u tha Black Thief, bitch always tryin to ‘steal-my-lines’
^^hott punch wordplay and personal 8/10
I’ll snap ure neck have ure head spinnin like the fuckin exorcist bitch
Bust ure nose givin u double vision so u won’t know which King is which
^^not hott 4/10
This King is bout to ‘blast-out’ beat u so bad ure wack ass will be ‘quittin-rap’
Call this damn bitch ‘ass-mouth’ cuz he got a PHD in always ‘spittin-crap’
^^hott wordplay and strong punch 8/10
Wack MC’s I detest so takin u out of the rap game is my current quest
*CLICK* *BOOM* my 12-Gauge flow leaves a fuckin hole in ure chest
^^ok punch not too hott 6/10
U scared I’m ‘detectin-chills’ I accepted this battle fuckin ‘expectin-skillz’
Like a drug I be ‘injectin-killz’ u shud leave and stick to ‘collectin-billz’
^^hott personal good wordplay best bar of battle 9/10

overall:35/50 (70%)

vote: king solo.......nice verse from both but king solo edged this one out with the opener and closer which took this battle for him hott shyt...i cant try to give advice because both verses were pretty hott but black use more personals

~!1!~

Yo Black theif ya structure was BEAT homie



King Solo...Ill kill you and ya whole crew roster
Have ya brains on the street resemblin pasta

Weak opener... 5.5/10

This nigga couldnt blow even if he was breakin wind
Couldn't rob a win from me even if he was breakin in

HOT 8/10

you whack...better make ya pen make amends
Or Ill leave ya as the only 18 year old wearin Depends

Weak... line.... 4.5/10

Solo King of losses....no one can top that
I'd murder ya wit only one bar even fought back

Decent 6/10

And its no competition...Ill easily murder ya in reptition
Heed my premonitions...you better treat my flow like superstitions

Nice.!! Closer 8/10


Over All

31/50


KiNg SoLo i Beleave u had nice structure but not the best better




You won’t see my destructiveness comin cuz I always ‘conceal-my-mines’
No wonder they call u tha Black Thief, bitch always tryin to ‘steal-my-lines’

NICE opener...!! 8/10

I’ll snap ure neck have ure head spinnin like the fuckin exorcist bitch
Bust ure nose givin u double vision so u won’t know which King is which

Weak...line... 4.5/10

This King is bout to ‘blast-out’ beat u so bad ure wack ass will be ‘quittin-rap’
Call this damn bitch ‘ass-mouth’ cuz he got a PHD in always ‘spittin-crap’

Decent 7/10

Wack MC’s I detest so takin u out of the rap game is my current quest
*CLICK* *BOOM* my 12-Gauge flow leaves a fuckin hole in ure chest

Decent 6/10

U scared I’m ‘detectin-chills’ I accepted this battle fuckin ‘expectin-skillz’
Like a drug I be ‘injectin-killz’ u shud leave and stick to ‘collectin-billz’

Good Closer 8/10

OVERALL
33.5/50

Get Uppin On This Shit!!!!!!

Flow: King solo
Punches: king solo
Structure: king solo


vote overall King solo...black theif u didnt come hard enough if dis battle fa real....

nice flows king

~king solo~
flows 7/10
pumches 7/10

~black thief~
flows 6/10
punches 5/10


overall vote vote-king solo

my vote
 

King Solo...Ill kill you and ya whole crew roster
Have ya brains on the street resemblin pasta
Okay...6/10
This nigga couldnt blow even if he was breakin wind
Couldn't rob a win from me even if he was breakin in
Okay punch.....6/10
you whack...better make ya pen make amends
Or Ill leave ya as the only 18 year old wearin Depends
Decent....lil bit better than ur others....7/10
Solo King of losses....no one can top that
I'd murder ya wit only one bar even fought back
Come on...u can do better....5/10
And its no competition...Ill easily murder ya in reptition
Heed my premonitions...you better treat my flow like superstitions
No punch....4/10

Verse Score - 28/50 = 56%

Aight your verse was just a lil bet less than decent....u only had one DECENT bar...couple okay ones....and two bad ones....u used useless multi's....didnt have any good meta's....or personals....just werk on your whole game....

You won’t see my destructiveness comin cuz I always ‘conceal-my-mines’
No wonder they call u tha Black Thief, bitch always tryin to ‘steal-my-lines’
Good personal and punch...kinda played though....8/10
I’ll snap ure neck have ure head spinnin like the fuckin exorcist bitch
Bust ure nose givin u double vision so u won’t know which King is which
Okay...but exorcist is played also....7/10
This King is bout to ‘blast-out’ beat u so bad ure wack ass will be ‘quittin-rap’
Call this damn bitch ‘ass-mouth’ cuz he got a PHD in always ‘spittin-crap’
Good punch....8/10
Wack MC’s I detest so takin u out of the rap game is my current quest
*CLICK* *BOOM* my 12-Gauge flow leaves a fuckin hole in ure chest
No real punch.....5/10
U scared I’m ‘detectin-chills’ I accepted this battle fuckin ‘expectin-skillz’
Like a drug I be ‘injectin-killz’ u shud leave and stick to ‘collectin-billz’
Okay....6/10

Verse Score - 34/50 = 68%

Okay your verse def had better punches than his....work on your meta's....and personals....dont use 'these' around your werds to emphasize shit.....we no a punch when we see one....jus good verse and keep elevatin....

Vote - King


Crew vote removed
-strobe