LyriCal Havok Vs Your's Truly
 

10 lines, 3 votes win...

wheres the poll...will this count towards my winz

Ofcourse... Start writing
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my bad computer is too slow...g'luck

I publically shame till those i battle, babble in vein...
Rocking your crane, the real life version of poxy mcbain
Fly like plane, PC to the end, box your domain...
carry bags full of petrol covered dirty rags
Leave ya seeing more stars like broken Flags
Stab you with the pole you shag, fuckin Fag
Ya aint Drag, it's just whats on his cloths stand
Kill you with both hands, slowly like Smokin
Hack-saw your body like the word for a Pole Dance
You all made up , like a bride service, Romance
signitures like something ya say after you received notice
So please take notice of my alternative motive...

6 minutes, im out now.

haha im trying differant structures to see which is best ANYWAYS....

Project Nine, Develop-a-Shrine, cuz you like a Jew an im Adolf Hitler during the Holocaust-Time (#14799...Numbers on Jews Arms)/
Im at my Prime, cuz my rhymes appear 'Without Warning', I come -HARD- anytime of the day, especially during the Morning (Mornin Stiff)/
Dont run bitch cuz you'll lose ya Traction, put 12 to ya Dome an 10 in ya Back like ya bodies an Improper-Fraction/
Like Tuff-Actin Tenactin ill Supress the Heat, impress the Streets by CONTROL-in ya fa-AULTs, an then jus pressin DELETE/

i think that was enough...but lets get some votes on this shit...

cmon is anybody even gonna vote.....................

Uppin for votes...

Since you explained everyone of your lines im going to go over a few of mine...



This line meaning the concept of computors ( Hence PC to the end) Then box your dome ( Head, Skull) in.



A pole dancer Grinds...



English term for losing your job, What would you say if you lost your job?

I didn't really need to explain any as its pretty simple style, however i have done to make this a more even Battle...

Anyway, Uppin.

ouch dis was reali hard for me to vote 4

wickedways had better flow in my opinion and i liked da line 'Leave ya seeing more stars like broken Flags'

lyrical havok had a nice flow and i like da line 'Dont run bitch cuz you'll lose ya Traction, put 12 to ya Dome an 10 in ya Back like ya bodies an Improper-Fraction'

dis is reali hard but imma go wid lyrical becoz of hes punches and dat line is jst gully

Sup yeah this was a tight battle I vote Lyrical...

Punches ~ Lyrical
Flow ~ Wicked
Creativity ~ Wicked
Vocab ~ Lyrical


Lyrical won coz he had the better punchs...

Umm, full of Idiots... I was told you people are like this, i came to this site from b-boys.com, ive ripped apart hundreds of heads there, the bolloxs my opponent dropped is laughable, yet you voted. I laugh at your wackness.

P.S



This line ripped the fuck out of his whole verse.

Ive shown this battle to 10 signed people on my msn so far, i rest my case. This site is nothing but 'Emcee Ed'...

Later.

LyRiCaL

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10

WiCkEd

Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 7/10

v/ LyRiCaL

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lyrical rip ya shawtie dat shit was hot like da battle

waz up
 

hey i know u don't know who i b but it'z dat psycho nigga dey call LC aka Da Beast From Da East" but neway i wanted 2 know if u wanted 2 team up & lyrically annihilate dez nothin rappin wack azz mcs