Lyrical Havok vs JSmoove
 

aight
5-10 line max
check in and blind spit in 20 min
house rules

chekin in...I'll spit in ten..................

ayo, this ain't even bout you, so you can fukkin' leave
instead of scribblin' yo shit wit pens, n wastin' trees

i spit like a priest, the way i preach multi- verses
CREWs-R-FIXED in bottomless pits, n carried out in black hearses

dumb azz bitches dunno how to vote, like EM, I say "fuk all of yous"
your opinon are one in a million, so push up weeds like Alliyah dos

some of ya'll are honest, others are haters and pricks
most of ya'll are pussy, and those few like HAVOC will git fukked in they split

yuse must think Smooves a joke, this ain't no COMEDY of KINGs
lyrically, I ENTERTAIN, MACK fools, and YEV-RAH wit xposed spleens

(YEV-RAH = HARVEY, backwards)

nice but that wasnt a fuckin battle verse....that was probably bitten

Opener:
Ya thoughts of winnin are full of liquor-
As janitor u enter the Hall Of fame to dust off my picture//

Barz is prune juiced You got no hard-shit-
I'll bury U w/ your portrait now u're an underground artist//
Ya hot season's over u're now in-winter-
u got it twisted Nowon knows u created shit like black inventors//
its cold in the earth but u receive-this-shit-hot-
u athiest? i'll still send u 2 hell believe-it-or-not//
watch me crush this pussy call me ripping-Jake-Stede-
I gnaw through weak Barz like carzed prison-escapees//
U need sum new tricks there all known-I-hear-
read the sign spittin ya Bullshit won't-fly-here//

Closer
I heard u was nice i must of been mistaken:- cuz u have no future in Rap. know why?...I'm already taken//

fuck oh well i went weak again thats how i got my second loss....oh well...uppin 4 votes..

im a vot lyrikal havok. like killah sed jsmoove's verse woznt even a battle verse lol. it woz wack. lyrikal went aiight, he battled aiight but u can do better if u think more. ma vote goes to lyrikal coz jsmoove's verse ddnt make n e sense and woznt even a battle verse
vote = lyrical havoc

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125237
hit up ma battle wid n honest vote plz ^^^^^

I can give a fuk if I get even half a RB vote. For those of you with no creativity at all...my opener stated that I don't care about who I'm battlin' at this time...his shit is unimportant to me. Actually, I'm addressing mofo's like Fresh Emcee and Killah Bwoy who don't read for understanding...they just want to see a verse with "fuk" or "dick" in the line. Like they some pussies. This shit ain't my life, I do this for relaxin' and takin' out my stress. So, with that said, fuk all of yous (respectively, of course). This shit can be UPP'ed or not...I don't give a ...

l.h. gets my vote b/c he came harder. better punches and structure. nicer floe and a better thought out verse. return the fava:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125523

vote=l.h.

v/havok

you had better punches and your flow was on point...........your metas was hot and your shit was good all around.........keep it up man

smoov you need to elevate man.......work on your structure and your punches cause they are to basic and you just got ripped this battle

honest vote
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124528

Hands down...LyRiKaL had this one...

Vote = LyRiKaL HaVoK

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