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pimp rawb 05-19-04 02:15 PM

****PIMP RAWB VZ ConTroVeRsLee...VOTE UP>>>PLEAZ!!!!!!!***
 
10 Lines
No D/r Crew Et.c

ConTroVeRsLee 05-20-04 11:47 AM

Aight so u wana battle? Tittle Tattle,in ya buggy still playing wit ya rattle/
Drop bombs Wen I rhyme,spit my shit on time,like i was sniffin white lines/
I Dont Know wot u heard bout me,but i can guarantee tht u aint no muthafuckin P-I-M-P/
U GotZ da net record?Hows Thts?Net Record for ordering a women's bra?/
Blah Blah Blah,that all we hear wen u speak,u cant rhyme,its like damn,you just leak/
On My 6th line now,4 more to go,You can call me woteva,but dont call me a hoe/
10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1....im blastin shit now like yo momma's dick spit blast cum/
contructing sentences,destructing lame emcees,ill break into ur brain,just gimme da keys/
flush yo face through ya ass,be gettin high,like u was smokin grass/
Now iv finished dis rhyme,in no time,10 lines,no beef,hit bac to me,da names ConTroVeRsLee!!!

There we go! peace!!

P.s Im a Female,just incase u get confused with da name!!

integer1337 05-20-04 11:52 AM

Isnt "I Dont Know wot u heard bout me,but i can guarantee tht u aint no muthafuckin P-I-M-P/" some 50 Cent line, correct me if i'm wrong?

ConTroVeRsLee 05-20-04 11:52 AM

LiL mistake in my last post...my bad!!!

Aight so u wana battle? Tittle Tattle,in ya buggy still playing wit ya rattle/
Drop bombs Wen I rhyme,spit my shit on <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=time&v=55">time</a>,like i was sniffin white lines/
I Dont Know wot u heard bout me,but i can guarantee tht u aint no muthafuckin P-I-M-P/
U GotZ da net record?Hows Thts?Net Record for ordering a women's bra?/
Blah Blah Blah,that all we hear wen u speak,u cant rhyme,its like damn,you just leak/
On My 6th line now,4 more to go,You can call me woteva,but dont call me a hoe/
10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1....im blastin shit now like yo momma's dick blast cum/
contructing sentences,destructing lame emcees,ill break into ur brain,just gimme da keys/
flush yo face through ya ass,be gettin high,like u was smokin grass/
Now iv finished dis rhyme,in no <a href="http://www.ntsearch.com/search.php?q=time&v=55">time</a>,10 lines,no beef,hit bac to me,da names ConTroVeRsLee!!!

There we go! peace!!

P.s Im a Female,just incase u get confused with da name!!

ConTroVeRsLee 05-20-04 11:54 AM

Fuck stupid me....dis da real one!!!

Aight so u wana battle? Tittle Tattle,in ya buggy still playing wit ya rattle/
Drop bombs Wen I rhyme,spit my shit on time,like i was sniffin white lines/
I Dont Know wot u heard bout me,but i can guarantee tht u aint no muthafuckin P-I-M-P/
U GotZ da net record?Hows Thts?Net Record for ordering a women's bra?/
Blah Blah Blah,that all we hear wen u speak,u cant rhyme,its like damn,you just leak/
On My 6th line now,4 more to go,You can call me woteva,but dont call me a hoe/
10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1....im blastin shit now like yo momma's dick spit blast cum/
contructing sentences,destructing lame emcees,ill break into ur brain,just gimme da keys/
flush yo face through ya ass,be gettin high,like u was smokin grass/
Now iv finished dis rhyme,in no time,10 lines,no beef,hit bac to me,da names ConTroVeRsLee!!!

There we go! peace!!

P.s Im a Female,just incase u get confused with da name!!

ConTroVeRsLee 05-20-04 11:55 AM

Yeh its sorta 50 cent like,but i changed it bout a lil,so it aint biting!

pimp rawb 05-21-04 10:23 AM

:shoot: ....Lets Get Shit Popping!!!

OMG! That Wouldnt Even Equall Wak In Ma Rapping-Book Ma Spit Vibrates And Leaves Ya Crack-All-Shook/
Punches?...Take ya Pick Jabs-Or-Hooks Fact Is U Couldn't Wacth Ya Own Pacth If U Was Captain-Hook/
Ur A Rapper?...Yeah Right Iam Ending-Your-Dreams Got More W-raps Dropped Than A Vending-Machine/
You Couldnt Touch Ma Flows If I Pissed-On-You, Aint No Big-Issue I Could Beat U Without Even Dissing-You/
Iam A Bet-You-Slip Cuz Even If I Wrote Ma Verse Wit Chalk Ya Still Coudlnt Get-A-Grip/
Why Sweat-It-Bicth Iam Leave U Red-n-Slit Unless U Get Off Da Net-N-Quit/
Iam Nock Ya Till-Ya-Fall Throw Ya Over Ma Shoulders Like I Spilt-Da-Salt/
Cuz I Dont Give A Fuck If Its A Bicth-I-Assault....
I'll Show U Some ConTroVeRsLee Chop Of Ya Tits And Make-U-A-Man, Take Ya Wig N Split Like Making-Tha-Band/
You Dropped Ya Verse 3 Times But It Still Aint 1/3-Of-Mines/
Ur Wak...Here Let Me Jog Ya Memory By Running-On-Ya-Mind/


Lil Quick Verse Cuz U Wak LoL But Good Luck Elevating

kEtCh~22 05-21-04 10:30 AM

Aight so u wana battle? Tittle Tattle,in ya buggy still playing wit ya rattle/
Drop bombs Wen I rhyme,spit my shit on time,like i was sniffin white lines

I Compare That^^^ to.....

That Wouldnt Even Equall Wak In Ma Rapping-Book Ma Spit Vibrates And Leaves Ya Crack-All-Shook/
Punches?...Take ya Pick Jabs-Or-Hooks Fact Is U Couldn't Wacth Ya Own Pacth If U Was Captain-Hook/

i've seen rawb come better..but its def enough ta win...1

Aillight 05-21-04 11:32 AM

Pimp Rawb bodied the hell out of Controverslee n just 2 help n the future Controverslee even if U change 2 r 3 words it is still classifiable bitin' tried not 2 use it too much against u but it din't help Pimp Rawb had better lines all around. As 4 punches "Iam Nock Ya Till-Ya-Fall Throw Ya Over Ma Shoulders Like I Spilt-Da-Salt/" -Pimp Rawb-was probably the best 1 n this battle. Controverslee shoud battle sum-1 wit less vocabulary 2 make it more even 4 her? n the future.

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Action 05-21-04 12:10 PM

Punches: Pimp
Personals: Not Many From Either
Flow: Tie
Structure: Pimp
Creativity: Pimp
Complexity: Tie

Best Line:

Ur A Rapper?...Yeah Right Iam Ending-Your-Dreams Got More W-raps Dropped Than A Vending-Machine/

Worst Line:

On My 6th line now,4 more to go,You can call me woteva,but dont call me a hoe/

Overall, Rawb's Verse Was Just Stronger. Contro's Verse Wasn't Hittin At All. You Need To Go At Ya Opponent Harder, Ya Verse Was Type Boring. No Real Punches,Wordplay, Personals, Etc << And Thats What Wins Battles.

VOTE: PIMP RAWB

Rising Sun 05-21-04 12:46 PM

Aight so u wana battle? Tittle Tattle,in ya buggy still playing wit ya rattle/
Drop bombs Wen I rhyme,spit my shit on time,like i was sniffin white lines/no sry...
I Dont Know wot u heard bout me,but i can guarantee tht u aint no muthafuckin P-I-M-P/ok...
U GotZ da net record?Hows Thts?Net Record for ordering a women's bra?/what?
Blah Blah Blah,that all we hear wen u speak,u cant rhyme,its like damn,you just leak/
On My 6th line now,4 more to go,You can call me woteva,but dont call me a hoe/no..
10,9,8,7,6,5,4,3,2,1....im blastin shit now like yo momma's dick spit blast cum/
contructing sentences,destructing lame emcees,ill break into ur brain,just gimme da keys/best one yet
flush yo face through ya ass,be gettin high,like u was smokin grass/
Now iv finished dis rhyme,in no time,10 lines,no beef,hit bac to me,da names ConTroVeRsLee!!!

pimp
OMG! That Wouldnt Even Equall Wak In Ma Rapping-Book Ma Spit Vibrates And Leaves Ya Crack-All-Shook/
Punches?...Take ya Pick Jabs-Or-Hooks Fact Is U Couldn't Wacth Ya Own Pacth If U Was Captain-Hook/damn...played but still nice
Ur A Rapper?...Yeah Right Iam Ending-Your-Dreams Got More W-raps Dropped Than A Vending-Machine/nice i like that
You Couldnt Touch Ma Flows If I Pissed-On-You, Aint No Big-Issue I Could Beat U Without Even Dissing-You/ok...
Iam A Bet-You-Slip Cuz Even If I Wrote Ma Verse Wit Chalk Ya Still Coudlnt Get-A-Grip/
Why Sweat-It-Bicth Iam Leave U Red-n-Slit Unless U Get Off Da Net-N-Quit/ok...
Iam Nock Ya Till-Ya-Fall Throw Ya Over Ma Shoulders Like I Spilt-Da-Salt/
Cuz I Dont Give A Fuck If Its A Bicth-I-Assault....ok...
I'll Show U Some ConTroVeRsLee Chop Of Ya Tits And Make-U-A-Man, Take Ya Wig N Split Like Making-Tha-Band nice nice
You Dropped Ya Verse 3 Times But It Still Aint 1/3-Of-Mines/
Ur Wak...Here Let Me Jog Ya Memory By Running-On-Ya-Mind/

nice.....damn man this was a once battle...pimp tooked this for sure cause of flow multies, and mostly cause he made sense and his punches hit harder look above for the explanations....good job to both, tight verse pimp...this is not questionable

The_Chosen_One 05-21-04 03:10 PM

pimp nice flow and good punches i vote for you
return the fava The Chosen One vs. You aint Ready

pimp rawb 05-22-04 06:55 AM

Uppin Thiz...To Gte It Finished................C'Mon Yall!!!

Mad Dog 05-22-04 07:34 AM

Pimp got this contro ur verse was put out like 3 times it was stretched the structure was off u had self glory lines hardly any punches weak vocab and poor attempts at multies...elevate


Pimp aight verse good disses and punches personals, still need to work on the structure and the lines were stretched but u got him easy still.

V/Pimp Rawb


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