Virginia_Fool -vs- Waz
 

5-10 lines
reg. voten rules
30 min to drop verse

good luck :nono:

watch how i brake bad on this nigga waz, when i pull out the glock with shells of brass-put 2 in ya back n 3 in your ass/
brake every bone in ya face, sting ya worse than a case of mace,
tire out this bitch cuz he cant handle my pace/
imma use this cat as a target,come in ya block ta shoot glocks into your apartment/
...............
strain these bullets ta create pain 2 ya brain, murder this bitch and cause flaming stain/
fuck with me is ta fuck with my gang,get banged in the head with a collapseable thang to smush ya brain/

*Foul Mouth* lol.... Shit Was "Horrid"

i can do way betta..........if you wanna see sumtin good set up friendly battle

Lmfao' .. Do Your Thang'..!!

Im Up Again "SpokenBluntly" .. lol..!! Can You See That.. She Making Threads Left & Right'

hey just saw this was lookin at member mugs

will post asap

Check this fool from virginia takin me lightly
think i'm a newb and this is an easy win?
.................................................. ...Highly un-likely
yo's from Va not far from b-More
but that .............. dont change the fact
....................................that I make ur girls knee's sore
she's a whore.............I'm sorry I had to be the one to tell ya
but that bitch has been around the block wit a couple different fellas

yo ur shit sucked this should be sufficent enough
just a quick key

uppin 4 votes
......................1.....................

vote motha fuckas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

virginia won this because you had very good stucture sharp punches that kept your flowness on track. You diserve it because of your rhymes were really good but could have throwed some multies in der aswell and word play just to make this match a slaughter. You won this anyway.

Virginia won better rhymes good stucture and flowed with his rhyme

Virginia = 22/40
Flow 5/10
Rhymes 5/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 7/10

Waz = 17/40
Flow 5/10
Rhymes 4/10
Structure 3/10
Punches 5/10

good battle though...Virginia_Fool won this one

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virginia got this one becuase his structure was better and his rhyming took no time. and most of al lhis closure was better, so my vote goes to virginia
and check this out iight
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127480