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Don VS. murda I wrote
ok 10-12 lines
u spit first no hate votes no cheating |
wtf is don/it sounds pretty gay/im gonna fuck u up/ or else get out my way/ i think ur name should be dawn/ cuz u sound like a faggish bitch/ u nothing but a stupid fucking itch/ if u win it must be a glitch/ cuz i can tell by ur name/ u must really suck/ so dont even try u stupid fuck/ hope u have some luck/ but everyone still knows u suck
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don yur gonna merk this lil bitch wun....nuff said
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thats my boy jokah aight here its bout to be ova
someone shoulda warned you not to click post a reply... little did this newb kno i am gona make him die... why dont u title this battle "help its an emergency"... cause your rhymes both suck and blow,together its called a mergery... your rhymes so sad the only way its hot is if ur screens lit on fire... afta this i want you to change your name to lyrically undesired... you jus have to stop readin your shits jus has me tired... if this is your career you should have yourself fired... why the hell is tha name murda i wrote... do us a favor wrap the mouse round ur neck,pull,n'choke... aight lets get some votes |
iight iight got me on round one
but heres round 2 bitch watch out for my gun :shoot: ur pussy ass prolly wouldnt wanta get cracked o but wait looks like u just got bitch slapped so shut the fuck up ur not even that good ur sound pretty white but act from the hood u nothing but bitch and u hide behind lies ur prolly a fat little fuck who sits at home and eats fries so yea keep on talking but back all ur shit up or else quit the talkin u whiny little fuck |
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that was ya best line don murda u gotta elevate in errthing aight man i kno u a noob but still hom8ie u gotta come strong DON elelvate ya punches homie..nice flow and structure.. open/none..but i guess DON took it Multies/none punches/ don wordplay/don flow/don structure/don finisher/none but don took it ma vote don...wun....be ee.zz ya'll |
bitch this one only sposed to be one rhyme...
but i guess u aint learn the lesson ur first time... rapein u this bad should be charged as a crime... that shit u say couldnt be profited for dimes... i am a fat italian kid who sits at home... but your my bitch dog so shut ur mouth heres a bone... join a wish upon a star foundation to donate you crome... u deserve to live in a box so tell em fuck findin me a home... nobody would want ur poor dirty ass with them... god maybe this time ull shut ur mouth so i wont have to rape u again now thats the end theresw only sposed to be one rhyme |
hahaha nigga u aint gotta spit again u MERKKKKKKKKKKKED him nuff said wun...
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yo jus so yall undastand im not hood im street but i didnt grow up wit blakcs or latinos i grew up wit italians and i neva act black like a wiger so dont try pullin that on me cause thats why i call mysefl don im an italian godfatha no ganglord
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yo queens
u think u got shit how bout we go i spit first |
yo jokah jus make a new battle n get him yo murda no offense but u gona get raped...again
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Murda I wrote: okay lemme be honest your structure was seriously fucked
up, the punches didn't really hit hard at all, didn't flow well & vocab was very basic Don: structure was a lot better than Murda nuff said bout that....punches hit a lot more harder than him in my opinion my favourite is "your rhymes are so sad the only way its hot is if your screens lit on fire... afta this i want you to change your name to lyrically undesired..." flow was good & vocab was better than Murda vote goes to: Don |
yo come on uppin for votes jus vote and ill return the favor
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man don u kicked my ass haha o well i get better every time i go
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so ima keep workin on it and eventually ill battle u again
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