Knowledge- Arch Dark
 

heres a lil something i call...
Knowledge

wish i could holla and force y`all to listen/
obey my trasmission/
arch makes his sole wish and/
its like your soul got christened/
we gotta open eyes to lies/
and street ties/
theres more to the world than blocks/
theres infinate blue skies/
now let me tell ya/
if you eating good how can you be a failure/
time is a commodity/
so spendthat sh*t well-yeah?/
it aint no oddity/
time is money/
and money is power/
some dudes be gettin $20 for each every hour/
unbalanced and unfair/
but we`re too high to care/
its time to awake/
use our powers and start to create/
some new history/
black ruled the planet/
but now its a mystery/
to those who write it/
do you think that?/
or are they tryin to hide it?/
educate your youth/
protect them from demons/
like the overproof/
all evil defeatable/
all knowledge teachable/
all kids are reachable/
all rules are breachable/
theres no limits/
freedom isnt given, you win it/
abraham freed the slaves/
cos his mother was in it/
the abuse of knowledge is a great evil/
and knowledge has been abused to still slave our people/

pretty good kinda long and a lil choppy i would try to work on balancing out them lines u goin big to small to much overall pretty good spit.........

yeah i was aiming to sound a lil erratic but keeping it structured if you get me?
kinda like a ludacris flow, if you heard me spit it you'd know what a mean cos when im rhyng that im speeding up and slowing down a key parts.
but you think i should just even it out?
ima write another 2 verses to go with that just havent found the time.
thanks for da opinion

yea its hard to get that effect when u cant spit it at ur oen voice pace ya kno...............................