CoRpSMaN 40CalHitz Vs T-STorm *VOTE PLEASE*
 

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t-storm up first spitten....

spittin
 

check n drop.......

where the fuck u get that name from?...40caliberhitz/
only way ya spit sick...is coz u infested wit syphliss/

ima show this noob he cant rap...bitch ima treat u like u got tha plague/
bitch walked stright into ma lap...sacrifise ya life cap ya wit a 12-gauge/

young ass nigga ima turn ya face green like fake gold/
thats envy dog ma lyrical style like paper bouta un-fold/

when i spit sick-shit ur way..all u can do is duck n-pray/
no matter how hard u hit..i keep cumin back like ground-hog-day/

you cudnt fuck wit ma flows if i was paid as your whore/
ma brain clicks n seals ya defeat before ya can move ya jaw/

u claim ur insane,like ur spits are sparadic-psycho-manic/
but u keep on ducking me,seems i got your hispanic-ass-to-panic/

youz a tall motherfucka..b hard to find a coffin that fits/
b harder 2 find a priest..that`ll forgive u for all ya weak spits/

ima rip u up,put u through a shredder,leave u 2 freeze in this english weather/
bat ur wack back up,strap u up,wish u luck..hope next time u do beta/ :nono:

*KiLLeRMaTiC Dropz From CoRpsMan*
 

OpEneR:
You tha type of nigga to make, a gay man straight--
And Im tha type of nigga to make, an insane man safe--
You punk ass should kno my punches and flows are made of Terror--
Ill shatter your dreams while you sleepin, in a box made of mirrors--

CoRpSMaN DropPiNg Bombz:
You more gay and queerer than faggits discussing interior designs--
You got inferior lines, you just cant see em' cuz you appear to be blind--
Like sippin on beer and wine, ill make you weary and dazed--
You fear me afraid, fuck your ass up, you shedin tears of pain--

CoRpSMaN PoInTz @ StOrm:
Im ranked first in tha game, you just started learnin to play--
Ill fuck you up worse than you came in, make ya feel hurtin and pain--
Make you feel nervous today, wit da big boys, you aint worthy to play--
Ill own you on your own home site, you shouldnt even deserve to stay--
Merc you with nades, make you fuckin burst into flames--
Injured you lay, cuz tha burn is rated third in tha flame--(3rd Degree Burn)

ClOsEr:
You second rate to me, your sumtin these members would hate--
Ill cut you a lesser fate, when you see these rhymes, youll die in 7 days--
Now Storm, hes a foe, No Doubt, make his tears pourin out--
Storm Bout to dig his own grave with a keyboard and mouse-

40 was on a higher level
flow:40
structure:40
punches:40
personals:none, tie
complexity:both were simple
vote 40

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Dynamic voted for me but Storm got my vote! What type of shit iz that!

40 cal u did preety good in my eyes but tstorm blew u, well done i thought that the flow by both wasnt bad but t-storm had that extra chilli

vote: t-storm

hhhmmmm... Definitely not even a fraction of da best shit I seen from 40, but still I think he barely did enuff to sew it up... T-storms verse was good, but I jus felt as if 40s was more creative wid da flow and depth. not much to judge on punches...

Vote=40cal

ok
 

my vote goes to t-storm....both equal in punches flow n structure
no personals from either
felt 40s woz bit deeper
but t had beta wordplay n multies
t`s verse woz funny asc vwell-gud spit from both though

40 was just more elevated than t-storm....so it made it hard to compete...overall t-storm had a nice verse just not good enuff for 40's

Aight Lemme Break This Down:

Flow: Tie
Punches: Tie
Wordplay: 40
Multis: 40
Creativity: 40
Personals: T-Storm (Not Many From Either Tho)


This Battle Was Decent. I Felt Like 40Cal Was A Lil More Creative Wit his Verse And It Just Hit Harder. Both Verses Fell Of Slightly At Different Points But I Think 40'z Was Overall More Consistent.

Best Line From T-Storm:

when i spit sick-shit ur way..all u can do is duck n-pray/
no matter how hard u hit..i keep cumin back like ground-hog-day/

Best Line from 40Cal:

Merc you with nades, make you fuckin burst into flames--
Injured you lay, cuz tha burn is rated third in tha flame

^^Like The Flow And Wordplay Wit The 3rd Degree.

Overall I felt 40 Came Harder, Although T-Storm Was Pretty Good Too.

VOTE: 40CAL

Flow: T-Storm
Punches: 40
Wordplay: tie
Multis: 4o
Creativity: tie
Personals: T-Storm
Structure: 40
dis wuz a god battle yall came out pretty even.....but at the end 40 edged out...his punches hit harder den storms.....good job both of you

flow: t storm
punches: 40
Wordplay: 40
Multis: 40
Creativity: even
personals: t storm
overall: 40
aiight battle but 40 took it juz by a bit

hit up ma battle wid n honest vote ya'll :

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...37&page=2&pp=15

where the fuck u get that name from?...40caliberhitz/
only way ya spit sick...is coz u infested wit syphliss/

^^ decent opener..but aids/syphillis lines are kinda played out

you cudnt fuck wit ma flows if i was paid as your whore/
ma brain clicks n seals ya defeat before ya can move ya jaw/


^^^ decent wordplay..ok punch


ima rip u up,put u through a shredder,leave u 2 freeze in this english weather/
bat ur wack back up,strap u up,wish u luck..hope next time u do beta/

^^^decent closer...

Verse coulda had harder punches...some wordplay/punches were played...

28/40




You tha type of nigga to make, a gay man straight--
And Im tha type of nigga to make, an insane man safe--

^^ That's wack...exactly where is the punch or diss at him?

P.S. Do not categorize your lines by section...opener/closer...etc...that's corny...jus let people read the verse

You punk ass should kno my punches and flows are made of Terror--
Ill shatter your dreams while you sleepin, in a box made of mirrors--

^^ Nice meta and imagery

You more gay and queerer than faggits discussing interior designs--
You got inferior lines, you just cant see em' cuz you appear to be blind--


^^ Ok..enough with the gay references...geesh..decent punch tho


You second rate to me, your sumtin these members would hate--
Ill cut you a lesser fate, when you see these rhymes, youll die in 7 days--


^^^ I like dat...haha

30/40

Vote: 40...better metas/punches


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