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strategies vs gip
10 lines min
14 lines max Drop 30 minutes after chek in Don't take 4ever to check in gip = hash89 = niknag3990 = DQ'ed for cheating |
Alright man this my check in
lets do it |
yo who goin first
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yo ok this my check in
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wateva im goin
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ok
This Kid With Wit... Dude A Sick Individual]1 'Showering' On Cats Cuz My Style Makes My 'Spits' Stay Habital]2 Merking Is Me... Man I'm Kicking A Ritual]3 With 'Punches' He's A 'Knuckle'-HEAD... Put 'Hands' To His FACE I Use 'Fists' To Stick In His VISUAL]4 Come And Get It Dawg... I'm On Levels You Ain't Big To See]5 Smack You *Backwards*, Now In Reality This Guy Is A *Pig* To Me]6 Don't Put Your Heart In You Hand Keep Your Chest Shut]7 If I Wanted You To 'Elevate'... The Title In Bitchslapped Would've Said 'Step Up']8 This Battle Wasn't Your Best Stunt]9 I've Seen Newbies With -Few-Sense-] Nothing Can Save You When I 'Run in You' Like Bow '-Move-ments-'] That should do it |
ok strategie u say u wanna be representin the 313
but yer battle record is as bad as a white convict wit a ghotee if i had to bet u dont even live in detroit, u live in a subburb since i got this ryme set i dont need no cuss words u aint ganna be able to respond to this shit that im droppin cuz my words r tha bomb bitch and u know i aint stoppin Ill walk up to u, spit in yer face givin u my pydermia thats a puss filled skin infection, my words will give u hypothermia Ill run up to u with a empty needle and give u an injection go and see yer bitch and give her a c-section so next time u wanna battle here take this lesson go to the store,pick up a gun, and shoot yer self with a smith and wesson |
Nice little drop
aiight uppin 4 votes |
ooh shit gip did it again this guy is crazy. nice work strategies but gip had it down. this vote goes to G.I.P.
Vote disqualified for Cheating. |
yo aite drop i dont know if it can hold up to mine though.
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What the fuck this guy did'nt even explain the vote
that is some bullshit. A mod or somebody needs to DQ his vote or make him comeback and make him explain it |
gip spun circles around this guy like fifty around ja rule this guy had nothin but nursery rimes ang gip had lyrics as good as early pac
Vote disqualified for Cheating. |
Merking Is Me... Man I'm Kicking A Ritual]3
With 'Punches' He's A 'Knuckle'-HEAD... Put 'Hands' To His FACE I Use 'Fists' To Stick In His VISUAL]4 ILL!!! Dam, i liked that. Well I thought strategies had this in almost every aspect. He had a hella nice flow go, i was definetly feelin that. GIP, nice spit dawg, but I wasnt feelin your flow as much and you need to watch your vocab in some places, it was kinda hard to follow |
yo u want me to explain aite. it came down in this line:
Ill walk up to u, spit in yer face givin u my pydermia thats a puss filled skin infection, my words will give u hypothermia this guy is totally origonal stop tryin to make up exuses cuz i lost homie |
strategies - wow most didnt rhyme....only decent punch was the elevation one.....work on using metas.....and personals.....dont stretch ur lines.....elevate on ur ordplay and structure....dont use 'around' your]8 words....its annoying.....verse score is 2/10....get a rhyme scheme!!!.....
gip - at least u had a rhyme scheme....and not as many stretched lines.....wordplay needs work....use better personals.....turn the ish u say into punchs....not say oh u rep 313....thats wack......use metas....but u got this cuz u rhymed....thats the basis of a battle....verse score is 2.3/10.... BOTH NEED TO ELEVATE ALOT Vote- gip |
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