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Omega Blu 05-20-04 06:54 PM

Omega Blu vs Gavin
 
10 lines exactly
u spit first
no unexplained votes

gavin 05-20-04 07:21 PM

yo u is japanese i be leaving u begging for please/
coz i come and take yo life away thats the way i sway/
u fuck with me then luck-ily u willl still be alive but i doubt it. this rap shit how u come about it/
im on top of my game ure rymes they be lame u would have to tame me like a lion i be buying all the guns to shoot u down silencer so theres not a sound/
i break off your arms hang then hang them on my walls at least i got the balls to come out and say i am white on this web-site every one else like yo im black when really they lack the truth of word the talk like there taking a turd i shoot u down like a bird the whole battle is ab-surd yo word.

Omega Blu 05-20-04 09:55 PM

lol

Imma dismember you and measure yo limbs with times height
And toast you while in yo casket at a temp of 400o ferenheight
Juss call me a bottle kid because imma keep on cappin
me losin this is like him growin nuts it's not gonna happin
Come fam I wont let u down Imma let this man Drown with a long ass frown
juss give me da win cuz he's juss gonna make dumb comebacks like Bobby Brown
Imma Japan man Imma sensi betta yet call me dan
U fate is sealed because I threw yo shit in tha fan

Omega Blu 05-20-04 09:56 PM

sorry that was 8 line any lets up for sum damn vote people
P.S. Im black i just live in Japan

gavin 05-21-04 08:38 AM

sorry dawg i just read tyhe thing and i just guessed u know any we need all ya votes up in this mutha fucka

Omega Blu 05-21-04 10:28 AM

up.

Omega Blu 05-21-04 10:57 AM

up.

Aillight 05-21-04 11:05 AM

much love 2 both of ya'll but this was kind of a...no it was a weak battle

didn't really enjoy it only gave it 2 Gavin 4 the rhyme scheme he had.Didn't like the verse itself, but I didn't like Omega's either.Gavin just had a better rhyme scheme.

vote-Gavin

LyricalMethod 05-21-04 11:09 AM

Omega Blu i give it to you b/c your verses rhymed. and your pucnhes were aight. nice structure-could be better. you flow was way better. lyrically you both need work. gavin try not to get your words "clunked up" and don't use the same wword like 6 times in a row. aight battle. bith guys need to step up. sorry gavin but Omega Blu gets my vote. return the fava.

vote=Omega Blu


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