met-a-4 vs lover boy
 

10 lines....

let go then u start!?

checkin in, bra!

I'm here so spit...... I'm waiting

this dudes a lover boy, but we know its to a man, cause jus las night, he had my cock in his hand/
and jus by ya name we can tell ya style is weak, i guess its better u on a key bored, cause no body really wants to hear you speak/
me on the other hand, shit im a poet, im here to show it, lettin everybody know it, this niggas booty's to lose, so i decided to sew it/
i know u scared to, thats why you need pitty, cause you cant really be that good of a lover wit only one titty/
so call ya whole crew and let em know who, merked ya ass, cause i'm the king and im still only new/
soon enough i'll be a vet, wit a whole army of techs, show me respect and i might let u play my shit in ya deck/
cause nigga i own you, you work for me, makin money sellin ya ass, whether or not you horny/
but suck a dick and make sure your mouths full, cause if i see you spit it out once, then you'll be out dude/
im done wit this shit, i dont even know why i battled you, oh thats right, it was an easy win, cause nigga i shattered you!

im waitin for u now bra! hurry up. i wanna get my votes and go. lol! j/j! but c'mon. i wanna see the outcome. peace!

damn bra! u said i took to long. shit, ya spits takin foreva. can u please speed this shit up a lil.

when I battle u I fell so great,with this pen in my hand ready to annihilate/
a nigga like u want to talk about sexing in bed,I got yo mama weter in her head water dripping down her leg/oops that not water go n get the wash cloth,I'm uh make her wash off/after she make my balls cough gone take the draws off gone take the bra, but no tell her to don't get mad when I do my thing an hall off/ :hump: I have yo life in the palm of my hand,u say u ain't a virgin yeah be thankful for yo right hand/

its over r should I say game over!?!?

aiight. not bad. now lets get some votes. lets get this shit upped!

people. please vote on this battle. dont sleep on it. dont be tired today. vote. peace!

Aight, hit this battle up for me. Appreciate it
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125389

Well first off, I liked the Flow MetA4 had going. I was feelin your vocab too so it made it easier to follow. and jus by ya name we can tell ya style is weak, i guess its better u on a key bored, cause no body really wants to hear you speak/ <<That was your best line, I thought. As for Lover Boy, you didnt have enough lines to establish a good flow, and your lines sounded like you didnt put a whole lot of thought into it. PS-The right hand line has been done to death. So just elevate your skills then yall should battle again. This one goes to MetA4

punches: meta
organization: meta
creativity: meta

Vote: meta

vote on my shit please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125654

^^^Thats gonna get DQd....wait, you didnt even vote
Smart one

Oh my bad, maybe you did, either way you gotta explain your shit dawg

yo, people, please vote on this. i really wanna close alot of these poles. aiight. peace!