Da Great 1 Vs gavin
you know the rules 10lines lets go u spit first
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f ure that damn great why do u mastebate intead of getting a bitch i leave this fool with a stich/
u try to find a job but u cant so u then attempt to rob a bank u iz a wank ill break u down with a left hook this guy aint a half way crook hes scared to look scared to death im guessing its his breath this cat thinks he can ryme like meth/ i smack u with a metaphor leave my fans screaming for more ure mumma be a hore she kinda slowerlike a naughhghhghg |
just alitte somtin 2 win cause ur verse sucked so no need 4 too much effort
Gavin take them bubble gum wraps back to the candy shack// ur rhymes are fiction while mynes state the facts jack// ur rhymes are faded G, while mynes jus glisten B// that whacc verse gets 'lit up' like a 'christmas tree' by me// ill throw u a big 'L' for 'L'ack of flows and ur 'L'osing spits// Gavin u have no text how much sorrier can u get????// retire from hip-hop, got to pop and form another n-sync// cuz for the first time Great 1 leaving u instinct// |
uppin 4 votezzx
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what about our battle nigga
spit now little man aight ill b waiting |
uppin
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well both were kinda weak but da best of da weak was da great 1 cuz da otha one was really lame. but if eitha 1 of u want a battle set it up and holla back
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uppin 4 votez
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da great 1 got this
gavin u got to do somthing a whole lot better than this. dog great1 actually had punch line and stucture work on it man get him next time vote: great one |
gavin
Flow 5/10 Rhymes 5/10 Structure 5/10 Punches 5/10 great Flow 6/10 Rhymes 7/10 Structure 6/10 Punches 7/10 vote goes to Great....he had betta punches.... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Vote: Da Great 1
This battle sucked.One of y'all come battle me so I can get some battles.Need to work on ya spits all around. |
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