need feed back on this quickie
 

Fuckin wit me
U fuckin wit nigga who would burn the city
Cuz im movin on up like Sherman hemsley
The boy leavin I see u if I look back down
U shoulda been warned heres yo chance to back down
U still here guess ya fams want a rip tattoo
I don’t kno but u act more pussy then tatu
all the things u said
U ready to be dead
Gunnin through ya head
Niggaz seein red
Holla at the kid
Im sixteen runnin the net the streets
Holla for me if u got a vet ta beat
Holla wit threats fo beef

if u kno who tatu is it would flo betta

you from jrz kid???

jersey in da house it was aight for a short piece but u can up on ya vocab

yeah up your vocab....

Elevate That Was Average...Improve Punches Wordplay Vocab....

5/10

it was weak and needed some major elevation up ya game kid u need to get better be4 u try to spit onm here again iight...............