this dont mean shit but tell us what you think......
 

all yall keep goin on about how gangster you are,
how good of a rapper you are,
when yall know you aint shit,
and the bitches well they aint shit nether
its time to drop new shit on yaw asses. ha ha

fuck with me n ima split your body in 3,
leave you burried in a cemitery,
packin more heat than the fuckin U.S. military,
the sound of my name makes the back of your neck get hairy,
tears from your fears makin your vision go blury,
muther fucker are you wairy?
do you dare me?
attack you so quickly you aint sure that you saw me,

bullets from an ak spray in every which way n direction,
so crazy everyone tryin to get me sectioned,
bitch praise the king don,
wit a dick so long i can wrap in round you n sqeeze you like i python,
yo this beef is on,
n at the end of this song you gonna shit ya self n run,
fuck this im done,
coz i gots a bone,
n ma bitch wants some,
n im too drunk n stoned to carry on,
am just startin to waffle on,
yo fuck it im gone.....

nah i wasnt feelin it at all u need to elevate........................................... .............

i know man i was so fucked when i wrote this thanks for the feed back though. watch this space........................

garbage man..straight garbage..how you gon talk about people actin like gangsters and than do it yourself? fuckin elevate homie...

im the lyrical street sweeper,
thats movin quicker than the grim reaper,
smoke you like i smoke a reefer,
the rap rhymin master,
bringin a global disaster,
yeah i just serpassed ya,
the everlaster,
im the last rap-lander,
just bitched slapped ya,
youve no mo flow,
why dont you pack your shit up n go,
yeah you n your fat ass hoe,
c unlike you i roll like a pro,

ha.....ha.....ha.....ha

yeah man, u need 2 elevate, check my open mic 4 ideas:
"R.o.d. (kool Col-b Style)" check that shit, werd

Exactly, How Does The Sound Of Your Name Make Someones Neck Get Hairy? Wtf!

it was funny 2 read tho i like da comedy of it but yeah u need 2 elevate it & develop ur tru potential