Nasty Em Vs. Neva Dat
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Listen...You talk Alot Keep Addin Exagerations/
This faggot hate...so he chit chattin' blabbin' debatin'/ Youza Snitch nigga..But keep addin you information/ Imma Infiltrate and set you to fire like imflammation/ Hey chap you hatin'..get holes like excavagation/ and each slug come wit force like a word in exclamation/ imma expectation..you more like and infestation/ i dont need no explation to exterminate ya/ its cake Im creatin' statements thats fascinatin/ and let the words rip you like process of laceration/ |
damn wat should i key?
i spit "Exclusive" "rapz" its like my nick name should be known as~ "Bar" :Code"~// ( think about it) And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//( think) Ima Dangerouz Cat, stay armed, 45' az a ~Palm Tool~// if ima "snitch,"i'll bet "50 cents" dat you rock Tee's dat spell out "~Ja Rule(s)~"// ( think whores) Why dis fagat posted first? iz He in a ~hurry to get murked~?// cuz "SlugZ" will Attract to you, like you was Forever ~"Buried in da dirt~"// ( think) should be lucky, u on da same thread as da godd,Em ~spittin barz~// little "fagat", thinkz he'z good cuz he wrote about his "Lifestyle" to ~"stick it Hard"~// (look at his sig) u cant be dat wack, son, so shoot me wit a ~betta rap~// u beating Nasty Em, iz as common as ur name bitch ~"Neva Dat"~// ( its a wrap bitch!) |
Nasty came better with his shit. his punches were hard and his wordplay had me laughing. good shit. Nevadat, not bad, just keep elevating and geta bit more complex.
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nastyem got that one on ya that shit is hot as hell nasty em
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Flow - Tie, Neva's Shit Flowed Good But It Was Sooo Simple. Em Was On Point Wit His And At The Same Time Including More In His Lines So He Gets The Nod.
Punches - Nasty, He Won This Category Hands Down. Neva Wasn't Even Tryin To Throw Any. Em Was Not Only throwin, But Hittin: And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~// cuz "SlugZ" will Attract to you, like you was Forever ~"Buried in da dirt~"// Personals: Nasty, Once Again Neva Was Kinda Non-Existent As Far As Personals Went. Nasty Was Hittin Tho: should be lucky, u on da same thread as da godd,Em ~spittin barz~// little "fagat", thinkz he'z good cuz he wrote about his "Lifestyle" to ~"stick it Hard"~// Wordplay: Nasty, Neva Didn't Attempt Any.. Nasty Did. Creativity: Nasty, Neva's Verse Didn't Really Have Any Originality Or Creativity. His Lines Were Somewhat boring, But Most Of Em's Were Mad Original. Structure: Neva. His Verse Was Structured A Little Better, And He Had Even Lines. Overall: NASTY EM Gets The Vote. He Out Did Neva In Most Categories, And Just Havin A Structured Verse Aint Gon Get You "W's". It's The Content That's Most Important, And Nasty Dominated. |
Listen...You talk Alot Keep Addin Exagerations/
This faggot hate...so he chit chattin' blabbin' debatin'/ Egh, kinda weak opener... coulda used some wordplay or a good punchline Youza Snitch nigga..But keep addin you information/ Imma Infiltrate and set you to fire like imflammation/ weak, very basic rhyming going on here no punches or wordplay. Hey chap you hatin'..get holes like excavagation/ and each slug come wit force like a word in exclamation/ Theres some wordplay in this-- this bar isn't too bad rather decent. imma expectation..you more like and infestation/ i dont need no explation to exterminate ya/ egh, nothing special here its cake Im creatin' statements thats fascinatin/ and let the words rip you like process of laceration/ egh basic... the punchline is basic and all it is is a couple of lines that rhyme. damn wat should i key? i spit "Exclusive" "rapz" its like my nick name should be known as~ "Bar" :Code"~// ( think about it) And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//( think) Decent couple of lines... You incorporated some wordplay, and combined it to form a creative punchline Ima Dangerouz Cat, stay armed, 45' az a ~Palm Tool~// if ima "snitch,"i'll bet "50 cents" dat you rock Tee's dat spell out "~Ja Rule(s)~"// ( think whores) Decent, I know where you were tryin to go here- kinda played but decent. Why dis fagat posted first? iz He in a ~hurry to get murked~?// cuz "SlugZ" will Attract to you, like you was Forever ~"Buried in da dirt~"// good wordplay...i feel it ( think) should be lucky, u on da same thread as da godd,Em ~spittin barz~// little "fagat", thinkz he'z good cuz he wrote about his "Lifestyle" to ~"stick it Hard"~// (look at his sig)- Good personal... This is what wins battles but its like noone hears me. u cant be dat wack, son, so shoot me wit a ~betta rap~// u beating Nasty Em, iz as common as ur name bitch ~"Neva Dat"~// ( its a wrap bitch!)- Good closer... I think ur verses are good man..good wordplay decent punches you win this battle no problem..Goodjob...1 |
how cum there aint no poll???? shit watz goin on? im confused...
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And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//
haha nasty em murdered neva with wordplay, metas, multis, flow everything, there was no contest |
aint dat 5 to 0??? how cum there aint no poll
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yooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! how come i fuckin cant get a win for dis match???????
no fuckin poll lol???? how u report dis shit |
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