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NastyEm 05-21-04 12:51 PM

Nasty Em Vs. Neva Dat
 
10 linez
no bite
dik hate votez or crew

chin chek* chek in

Nevadat 05-21-04 12:54 PM

Checkin in...........................................

Nevadat 05-21-04 01:00 PM

Listen...You talk Alot Keep Addin Exagerations/
This faggot hate...so he chit chattin' blabbin' debatin'/

Youza Snitch nigga..But keep addin you information/
Imma Infiltrate and set you to fire like imflammation/

Hey chap you hatin'..get holes like excavagation/
and each slug come wit force like a word in exclamation/

imma expectation..you more like and infestation/
i dont need no explation to exterminate ya/

its cake Im creatin' statements thats fascinatin/
and let the words rip you like process of laceration/

NastyEm 05-22-04 01:48 AM

damn wat should i key?
i spit "Exclusive" "rapz" its like my nick name should be known as~ "Bar" :Code"~// ( think about it)
And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//( think)
Ima Dangerouz Cat, stay armed, 45' az a ~Palm Tool~//
if ima "snitch,"i'll bet "50 cents" dat you rock Tee's dat spell out "~Ja Rule(s)~"// ( think whores)
Why dis fagat posted first? iz He in a ~hurry to get murked~?//
cuz "SlugZ" will Attract to you, like you was Forever ~"Buried in da dirt~"// ( think)
should be lucky, u on da same thread as da godd,Em ~spittin barz~//
little "fagat", thinkz he'z good cuz he wrote about his "Lifestyle" to ~"stick it Hard"~// (look at his sig)
u cant be dat wack, son, so shoot me wit a ~betta rap~//
u beating Nasty Em, iz as common as ur name bitch ~"Neva Dat"~// ( its a wrap bitch!)

macKa 05-22-04 02:23 AM

Nasty came better with his shit. his punches were hard and his wordplay had me laughing. good shit. Nevadat, not bad, just keep elevating and geta bit more complex.

NightRida 05-22-04 02:24 AM

nastyem got that one on ya that shit is hot as hell nasty em

Action 05-22-04 02:24 AM

Flow - Tie, Neva's Shit Flowed Good But It Was Sooo Simple. Em Was On Point Wit His And At The Same Time Including More In His Lines So He Gets The Nod.

Punches - Nasty, He Won This Category Hands Down. Neva Wasn't Even Tryin To Throw Any. Em Was Not Only throwin, But Hittin:

And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//

cuz "SlugZ" will Attract to you, like you was Forever ~"Buried in da dirt~"//

Personals: Nasty, Once Again Neva Was Kinda Non-Existent As Far As Personals Went. Nasty Was Hittin Tho:

should be lucky, u on da same thread as da godd,Em ~spittin barz~//
little "fagat", thinkz he'z good cuz he wrote about his "Lifestyle" to ~"stick it Hard"~//

Wordplay: Nasty, Neva Didn't Attempt Any.. Nasty Did.

Creativity: Nasty, Neva's Verse Didn't Really Have Any Originality Or Creativity. His Lines Were Somewhat boring, But Most Of Em's Were Mad Original.

Structure: Neva. His Verse Was Structured A Little Better, And He Had Even Lines.

Overall: NASTY EM Gets The Vote. He Out Did Neva In Most Categories, And Just Havin A Structured Verse Aint Gon Get You "W's". It's The Content That's Most Important, And Nasty Dominated.

Know-Gimix 05-22-04 02:34 AM

Listen...You talk Alot Keep Addin Exagerations/
This faggot hate...so he chit chattin' blabbin' debatin'/
Egh, kinda weak opener... coulda used some wordplay or a good punchline
Youza Snitch nigga..But keep addin you information/
Imma Infiltrate and set you to fire like imflammation/
weak, very basic rhyming going on here no punches or wordplay.
Hey chap you hatin'..get holes like excavagation/
and each slug come wit force like a word in exclamation/
Theres some wordplay in this-- this bar isn't too bad rather decent.
imma expectation..you more like and infestation/
i dont need no explation to exterminate ya/
egh, nothing special here
its cake Im creatin' statements thats fascinatin/
and let the words rip you like process of laceration/
egh basic... the punchline is basic and all it is is a couple of lines that rhyme.


damn wat should i key?
i spit "Exclusive" "rapz" its like my nick name should be known as~ "Bar" :Code"~// ( think about it)
And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//( think)
Decent couple of lines... You incorporated some wordplay, and combined it to form a creative punchline
Ima Dangerouz Cat, stay armed, 45' az a ~Palm Tool~//
if ima "snitch,"i'll bet "50 cents" dat you rock Tee's dat spell out "~Ja Rule(s)~"// ( think whores)
Decent, I know where you were tryin to go here- kinda played but decent.
Why dis fagat posted first? iz He in a ~hurry to get murked~?//
cuz "SlugZ" will Attract to you, like you was Forever ~"Buried in da dirt~"//
good wordplay...i feel it ( think)
should be lucky, u on da same thread as da godd,Em ~spittin barz~//
little "fagat", thinkz he'z good cuz he wrote about his "Lifestyle" to ~"stick it Hard"~// (look at his sig)- Good personal... This is what wins battles but its like noone hears me.
u cant be dat wack, son, so shoot me wit a ~betta rap~//
u beating Nasty Em, iz as common as ur name bitch ~"Neva Dat"~// ( its a wrap bitch!)- Good closer... I think ur verses are good man..good wordplay decent punches you win this battle no problem..Goodjob...1

NastyEm 05-22-04 12:20 PM

how cum there aint no poll???? shit watz goin on? im confused...

Beyond Logic 05-22-04 12:59 PM

And u couldnt "(Ex)-Terminate" Me if u even had a ~Divorce wit Arnold~//

haha

nasty em murdered neva with wordplay, metas, multis, flow everything, there was no contest

NastyEm 05-22-04 02:27 PM

aint dat 5 to 0??? how cum there aint no poll

NastyEm 05-26-04 12:00 PM

yooooooooooo!!!!!!!!! how come i fuckin cant get a win for dis match???????


no fuckin poll lol???? how u report dis shit


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