~*** Ma Thoughts Ma Vision!!!***~
 

Yall Can't See Ma Vision, You Aint No Optician...
Probably Think I Support Ur Decisions Cuz U Got Ma Vote Like Sum Politician/
Iam On A Mission To Stop Yall Bicthin' Cuz Thiz Site Got More Bicthes Than A Kicthen/
How U Know What I Feel?, Thiz Is Ma Pain Ma Struggle/ Dont Steal Or Burgle But Yall Wacthin Both Hands Like A Juggle/
Whats Up Man???....
Yall Like Poor Fire Marshalls Cuz U Aint Ready For Ma Flamez/
Ma Spits Struggle To Cacth Ur Attention like Wak Playstation Gamez/
Am I Lame?....
Hell Naw!...Ma Thoughts Could Rip A Diamond And Ma Selfesteam Higher Tha Da Pants On Simon*/
If Ma Thought Was Contagous Ma Spits Would Make Head Lines And Front Pages!/
If U Could Walk In Ma Shoes U Would Have Blisters/
Dawg Ive TURNED More Corners Than Twisters/
If U Was Me U Would Probably Run Fast And Become A Cheater(Cheatah!)/
Loose All Ya Money To A Parking Meter...
Just So You Could Rock A Spot Without Getting Shot/
Ive Been Ill Ask Ya Doc Or Get Me To Give Ur Door A Nock/

Maybe Am Mental, Yes!....But When I Got Than Pen In Hand I Know Iam Blest/
And Ma Vision Sick So Dont Try To Test


:shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

(*Simon Cowell...American Idol Judge)


Yall keep Saying I Got Bad Structure So I Thought I Would Concentrate On That In Thiz Vesre Holla....

*CoRpMaN Applaudez Your Spitz*
 

That Was St8 Flames Dawg! You Was FeLLiN That From Top To Finish!

Yall Like Poor Fire Marshalls Cuz U Aint Ready For Ma Flamez

liked that^^^ nice creativity

Hot ass opener:Yall Can't See Ma Vision, You Aint No Optician...
Probably Think I Support Ur Decisions Cuz U Got Ma Vote Like Sum Politician/
You were straight burning it up from the beginnin to the end. I liked that. Your flow was killin and had good punches. Holla back.

damn dog that was a fucking hot ass verse damn im feelin that shit glad u got me to peep it

yea dats a nasty flow ive been keepin an eye on you and tay since yall came up in herrrre

Hot Shit Fam..

Iam On A Mission To Stop Yall Bicthin' Cuz Thiz Site Got More Bicthes Than A Kicthen/

^^Couldn't Have Said It Any Better Myself.

Hell Naw!...Ma Thoughts Could Rip A Diamond And Ma Selfesteam Higher Tha Da Pants On Simon*/

^^lol. Creative Ass Line Right There Son. I Liked That Shit.

The Whole Verse Had Creativity And An Ill Flow. Keep It Up.

Iam On A Mission To Stop Yall Bicthin' Cuz Thiz Site Got More Bicthes Than A Kicthen


lol was feelin that line there

Yeah I Was Feeling That Nice Constitent Flow............

Uppin Yall!!..

Keep Tha Criticism Coming.......

Yea, Nice Drop. Used A Nice Flow. Just Expand Vocabulary And Make It Even Hotter. Pe@ce

init agreed, gd flow but if u extend ya vocab a bit to make it sound betta: Nuttink ta elevate all gd

pretty good but there were some parts that needed some elevation iight.......yo sup baby girl lol we meet again lol.........

Hott As Per Usual Pimp, Nice To See Six Holdin It Down Here,Flow Was On Point
FourMost aka Verb

Niceness~~~ flow and multis was off da hook... ~KEeP Em ComMiNg~

~~~peace~~~~~