Smiley vs. Met-A-4
 

Aiight! Here it is. I'm checkin in. I'll drop my shit once you check in and set the rules. Peace!

rules.. 10 lines.. no hate votes.. thats bout it.. peace you spit first

aiight. lets do it.....

first things first, and thats slaughterin this chump, cause the only thing he'd leave on me after this battle is one lump/
cause you don't hit hard wit nuttin, especially wit rhymes, they all sound used, while mine explode like mines/
like straight in ya face, you get set in ya place, comin at you blowed, but still got sence to spray you wit mace/
i'm the definition of an ill MC, i jus try to keep undercover, jus like i do wit ya moms, try to keep it under the covers/
i know it hurts to see ya self lose jus cause of ya name, but c'mon bra, smiley? everyone says its lame/
cause u wont be smilin by the time i through wit ya, you'll be frownin like u lost, o, thats right, the win, i already pulled it bra/
so u might as well close ya mouth and neva speak again, matter of fact you should kill ya self and let the blood leak with-in/
ya whole body, all through your immune system, i'm like the wrath of AIDs, i kill like an un-human christian/
possesed by the devil, told to slice you in many ways, eat and devour you and shit you out piece by piece between many days/
cause i'm a killer, like a zombie on thriller, you can't kill me, and the reason i'm battlin u, is jus for a quick win, ur a filler/

aiight. i spit. your turn. my bad it took so long i had to sign off for a sec. peace!

lmao ohh gosh aiight man............................

check it nigga your flow is weak
your rhymes are like chess games, cuz everytime u look at them you just wanna go to sleep
talking bout my mom.. please your not a man ...simply
your fuckin dick is about as small as my pinky
and i seen you pics man..
you look like someone fry'd your frame
ya face looks more smashed than a grapefruit after it gets run over by a train
battle me? why even try ya lame
your not on my skill level
you couldnt cook up hot shit putting your notebook up against a steel kettle
yet you still meddle, bitch you need to respect mines
ya text rhymes remind me of a fat persons stomach (why?)
- cuz the'yve got a lot of STRETCHED LINES (hahaha) -
i dont even know what ya was doing typing the looks
cuz instead of a battle your verse looks like you were writting a book


fuck it ya done nigga..hahaha

I'm not sure who to vote for. I got the feeling you were both saying the same shit just differently. I'll go for smiley, because he had good come backs to Mets arguments

i guess i'm done. or not. but yeah, i'll let u says what u wanna. but lets vote on this people. i wanna see this outcome. peace!

yo if this was a stretch ur lines battle it would be a tie haaaaaaa naw on the realz i thought smilez had it just better rymes in this one used better wordplay
but i honestly would like to see a bar set up and with even lines why dont u2 rematch after u here all the feedback so we can see the improvements ..that would be cool to see
anyway mad props to both for just enjoyin this shit aight holla

thats two votes.. yall know you can drop a poll vote if you want right?

lets keep on votin on this shit. cause i wanna see the feed back. and see who wins. but after ya'll vote here, check this:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125733

c'mon on people. vote on this shit. dont leave it like this. lets get this pole closed. peace!

word.. vote ......................................

Yo man this was a weak ass battle but smily won like hell he tore you apart and beat you wit your own shit so he won

uppin this..............................................