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Rickachet 05-21-04 04:24 PM

new kid just rhymin
 
catch me on the open mic
whilin off at popes and dic's
flow is nice
strangle you, cant get away the rope is tight
attack nuns wit guns
go after black ones with buns
son, im only hear to rize to accension
niggas die when i mention
bitch lie in the kitchen
quit tryin to listen
and just listen
i must mention
my rhymes will grab and teach you
give you rehab or defeat you
like a virus, stab or delete you

Wrenegade 05-21-04 06:47 PM

damn! yo all right yea it coulda been a whole lot fuckin nicer.. no doubt about that but..that shit was fuckin flames to me i dont know why... yea i got the flow and ll tha multis and shit even tho you aint dress that shit up like a bitch man... nice shit it seemed like a real fuckin keystyle for real dog honest... damn shit was nice, stay real dog

Rickachet 05-23-04 08:47 PM

thank you man, for your opinion, i gotta lot of work to do

young beezy 05-23-04 09:18 PM

this was basic, a beginners work this coulda been a whole lot better but stay up

$ike 05-24-04 04:38 PM

noob work.......ok fo noob tho keep elavatin


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