Street Credibility
 

(hook 2x)
Way back, I stayed strapped,
Had a gat, Watchin' my back
I walk the streets, sellin my crack

I do what i feel like
I'm on the corner watchin cops ride by
I'm clockin' their time, I'm poppin the nine
At any person that be thinkin' they jesus

(verse 1)
These young boys try to teach me a lesson
But, I told these kids it's nothing hustle is my profession
I set shop, run blocks under my descretion
I cut pies to divide, split them up into sections
I terrorize, vandalize, analyze their weapons
I let the coke boil in pots, watch it get hard like an erection
Snitches don't talk giving confessions
To the police, information leak, having us stressin
Thinkin' of interrogators asking us questions
Don't put me under pressure, I ain't giving suggestions
And that dude that wanna snitch, gone be wantin' protection
I swear the god, yes wanting protection
I take charge like I won the election
I'm the number one overall draft pick best selection
I'm bettin' that you'll know I'm the newest edition
I Move weight like the world's strongest man competion
F.ck it................I got the workers in the kitchen
In the room is, naked women, supplying crack addiction

(Hook 2x)
Way back, I stayed strapped,
Had a gat, Watchin' my back
I walk the streets, sellin my crack

I do what i feel like
I'm on the corner watchin cops ride by
I'm clockin' their time, I'm poppin the nine
At any person that be thinkin' they jesus

You get reese to pieces, I never got bagged for my cases

People callin me gangsta, Never petrified from the gun blast

You'll dudes run fast when you'll hear my sh.t

Like two shots from the pistols
Put two holes in your chest, take place of your nipples

From down bottom is where its at. west philly...and all my DE peeps....representing the Blueprint.....

You Shoulda have collabed with me :thumbup:
Good Piece Though Good Vocab But the last two lines were weak should have not put it there it sounded like you had Writers block at the end
it was and overal 7.5/10 . .

what are you talkin about, theres only 1 verse there

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Yea I Thought It Was OK, But You Dont Need To Talk About Gunz That Much.....

Good Flow Nice Hook....Needs Some More Wordplay

7/10

Man if you gon do a street verse it has to be hot, cuz that shit is redone over an over, on yours was real basic an sounded like every other nigga claiming the streets, man I thought you would have dropped better than that, an chorus needs serious work man, no hate jus truth

nah too tell you'll the truth...this was some old sh.t like way back that i had stored in memory so why not put it on here....and as you can tell i don't really care if this piece was all that..just trying something different. ....that's why i don't like rapping about gunz and shit....because people that aint from no hood and never seen sh.t like that...don't know a damn thing that i am talking about.......do anyone agree with me on that.

just uppin to the first page

"get hard like an erection" cmon man.. dont need shit like that..

Was aiite peice tho..

i know right....but thanks for your feed back.....

up............. this....................... shit....................

I appreciate all the positive comments..

appreciate it............

it was ok at da beginning den u fall off at da end but u did dat stay up on ur game & perfect ur rhyming skills