::..::Action Vz Aillight::..::
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10 Lines(5 Bars) MAX First To 5 Wins No Crew, Hate, Or D/R Votes You Spit First G' Luck... |
1st again?
ho0w about u go first n i'll spit n like 10 minutes? |
Aight I'll Spit In A Minute..
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his only ACTION is wit guys, chin 2 they sack son//
this fag goes down harder than the titanic captain// hotsauce, couldn't heat up the words that u spit// wit rhymes like that u couldn't blow up if u sucked a vertical dick// he says his occupation is to eat emcees, but he spoke 2 fast like ricans, ho so please// those weren't rappers, it was dick that gave u that throat desease// he sits alone n his house, wit no life holdin his mouse// but u clicked on the wrong 1 so i'mma strike on all u have like i tried 2 bowl n ur house// i'mma finish this shit n end him wit this// take my advise 4 ur lyrical, use more than just syllables r u'll need a miracle bitch// (his best rap trait is his use of syllables-rhymin wit big words r more than 1) |
u took 2 long
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Listen,
RB Watch Closely As I Snap This Fiend cuz every punch I Pack Is Mean.. This guy couldn't Spit Flames wit A Light and a Mouthful of Gasoline.. (Aillight) This Hoes Trash and the only time he Hittin Wit Blades when he Mows-Grass.. And Aillight's Moms gotta be from Jersey the way her Legs Throwback.. Just give up fam, Throw In The Towel before I Choke Ya Wit Vowels.. And put a hole big as Globe In Ya Bauer, son can get Roasted for Hours.. Ya Hope I'll Devour cuz I eat styles and straight up Slay Any Beef.. Leave ya White Tee red like you Play On The Chiefs, I Pray On the Weak.. Homie claimed to be ill, and I forgive you even tho you was Wrong To Lie.. But next time I'ma leave more Metal In Ya Face then that Rodman Guy.. Aight yall vote up... |
i don't know if it's too late 2 fix it but on that 1st line i wanted 2 put "...chin 2 they sacks and// this fag goes down harder than the titanic captain//"
if it's too late 4get it but I like the way this rhyme sounds better. B back later r 2morrow please vote cause I do go around votin on battles |
RB Watch Closely As I Snap This Fiend cuz every punch I Pack Is Mean..
This guy couldn't Spit Flames wit A Light and a Mouthful of Gasoline.. (Aillight) This Hoes Trash and the only time he Hittin Wit Blades when he Mows-Grass.. And Aillight's Moms gotta be from Jersey the way her Legs Throwback.. DAMN! action murdered this shit, aillight had punches n wordplay but action was just too strong. his multis were better, his punches were better and his flow was more on point. nice shit |
Action killed this one, he brought punches that were hard and to the point. Sorry Aillight, I'm going wit action
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Allight
his only ACTION is wit guys, chin 2 they sack son//Weak but Is A Personal this fag goes down harder than the titanic captain//Elevate hotsauce, couldn't heat up the words that u spit// wit rhymes like that u couldn't blow up if u sucked a vertical dick//c'mon too simple dawg he says his occupation is to eat emcees, but he spoke 2 fast like ricans, ho so please// those weren't rappers, it was dick that gave u that throat desease//WTF! iam Lost Now he sits alone n his house, wit no life holdin his mouse// but u clicked on the wrong 1 so i'mma strike on all u have like i tried 2 bowl n ur house//Almost Average i'mma finish this shit n end him wit this// take my advise 4 ur lyrical, use more than just syllables r u'll need a miracle bitch//Best Lines So Far Action RB Watch Closely As I Snap This Fiend cuz every punch I Pack Is Mean.. This guy couldn't Spit Flames wit A Light and a Mouthful of Gasoline.. (Aillight) Good Personal This Hoes Trash and the only time he Hittin Wit Blades when he Mows-Grass.. And Aillight's Moms gotta be from Jersey the way her Legs Throwback.. Lol Nice Just give up fam, Throw In The Towel before I Choke Ya Wit Vowels.. Hot And put a hole big as Globe In Ya Bauer, son can get Roasted for Hours..Ok Ya Hope I'll Devour cuz I eat styles and straight up Slay Any Beef.. Leave ya White Tee red like you Play On The Chiefs, I Pray On the Weak.. Ok Homie claimed to be ill, and I forgive you even tho you was Wrong To Lie.. But next time I'ma leave more Metal In Ya Face then that Rodman Guy.. Hot Action Takes thiz 1 Easy With Better Eveything Alligth Elevate Dawg...Improve On ya Punches Structure Everthing Realy |
^^ Im reportin YOU to an ADMIN Pimp RAWB..u got some BUll shit goin on wit the votin dawg
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action took this now vote in my battle against krez
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Yo N Sight Get The Fuck Out My Thread If You Aint Gon Vote.
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Uppin 4 Votes...
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