DON <VS> reddot06
 

10-14 lines
no cheating
u spit first
lets go good luck

alright don what are u from the mafia?
hold on a sec while i laugh at ya!
you know why they call me red dot
cause if i pop my nine think your living? think not
you dont see it coming you take six to the back
you try to battle me but the skillz you do lack
cause im a whiteboy rapper but im hood locked
its like shane mosely and pee wee herman you get rocked
cause i throw punches like a rocky balboa
you still i virgin while im a dick throwa
don you think you stood a chance with reddot
step to me get burned bitch im too hot
this was done before it started
your rhymes are weak and half hearted
RED DOT

aight heres my verse.........

REDDOT your just a spot that i'll clean wit bleach...
and once its gone youll have nuthing and left feelin beseeched...
if you got a warning not to post on this battle you should have heeded it...
cause i'll beat you wit a bat and turn you into my main ingredient...
the only lines of yours that are good are when you were feeding it...
i dont write out of a notebook my lyircs come off at an immediate...
after this battle you'll hide so to hunt you i'll use a beagal...
to pick up your scent i'll let him smell the wiger clothes you ordered off speagal...
my lyrics i try to make them rich and regal....
but yours suck so bad in 9 states theyve been declared illegal...
and even when this battle will be done and over...
this pussy reddot will always have to keep an eye over his shoulder

aight this is a newb battle so give us some suggestions and thanks for any votes pc

and yo balla69 betta not be votin on this cause i seen how he votes u on every battle so dont be cheatin on this one

vote on this battle and ill retun the favor upppin

ok uppin for votes please vote ill return the favor

aaight ..

RedDot-try to make you sentences a lil longer cause i could almost predict what was coming next and take a lesson from DON how he used more that 2 rhymin words.

Don-nice work on tha vocab. but you still need some work on your punches and structure but it was an all around aaight verse..

so i vote for/ Don

hit me back honestly...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123696
and tha one on my signature.

uppin for votes if you vote leave a link and ill drop an honest vote in your battle thanks pc

reddot06: well fo real dawg you ain't got the hardest punches, structure
was aight flow was aight & up your vocab

DON: i have to say your punches were a lot better than reddot06.....
structure was aight flow aight & good vocab

vote goes to: DON

plz do a honest vote on mine aight thanx:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125133

i know im from the same area as reddot but...
ima give props to both these guys, you both put it out. i like both of the rhymes i jsut like reddots betta

vote:reddot

don way better verse that red dot's obviously. step up your wordplay and punches though, they were kind of weak. your verse was aight. red dot your verse was terrible, this is not a preeschool site dso don't post preeschool shit aight. step up your lyrics and punches b/c if you continue to write like that you bound to get ko-ed. don better punches and structure. return the fava, lyricalmethod vs. aillight

vote=don

Nice, there was an obvious diss that DON could have used but he didn't, so thats a loss of a point. RedDot, you had a nice flow, but you didn't have many puches so I'm gonna vote fo Don

Now vote on this dog
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125881

yo uppin for votes we need more votes to close this battle ill return the favor

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