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Mentalist 05-22-04 09:47 PM

Aiyo hotfire need feedbak
 
aiyo the street taught me how to black on u cowards
yall weak of heart pussies get rained on like showers
thunder clouds gather and ur power dimenish
no bitchnot now u could cry when i finish
cuz its my regime jus call me yung castro
i was writin while yall was gettin all the cash flo
but im pissed and yall niggaz done ticked me off
im bout ta blow wit so much green it would make snoop dogg cough
shoot dawg while u just chillin holdin a gat
when u know we be bustin caps puttin holes in ya hat
holdon to dat
the boi got moe money to make
he stickin kids wit guns so big
it would make canada shake
bustin off havin niggaz poppin and lock
white people inside lockin and watchin
when im done wit u the goverment next
and fuck a bible its bad look wat it done to X (my dawg)

Mentalist 05-23-04 11:39 AM

uppin fo feedbak

Mentalist 05-23-04 06:39 PM

aiyo sum1 gimme some feedbak ne1

Mentalist 05-24-04 08:00 AM

aiyo stop fuckin sleepin on my shit ya damn faggots

Big Nom 05-25-04 08:56 AM

shit and i couldnt of put it in any other words
HOTT....keep advancin...6/10
1 Luv

Soul Sickness 05-25-04 02:06 PM

it was iight but u need to elevate some more iight......................................l...... .........

RumpleSmoothspin 05-25-04 02:44 PM

it was nice from da flow.. but try adding some more multis.. and creating more word pictures.. if u doin collabs like that.. nah whut i mean?? step it up~~~


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