::whitedice013 vs beggina mc::
 

10-16 lines you spit first

U spit 1st man...I gotta get in da flow by watchin some1 else go

beggina man, ive seen your rhymes already
you jumpin all over the place you cant keep your flow steady
thats right you a beggina so dont test me
im high class bitch and soon youll see
taht my rhymes arent normal and not ordinary
cause i spit so hard youll be seein the tooth fairy
cause i throw all the punches and ill break yo jaw
cause im not righty nigga im a striahgt south paw
man you aint no mc, and thats clear to see
that they want me, and the girls want you through pubirty
cause we all know balls are shrinkin
you wanted to battle me bitch what were you thinkin
man this thing is over, dawg dont even try
anybody votes for you, we all know its a lie

yo are you gonna go or what son? geeze its takin you long enough

High class/
ya movin lowa/
why dont you try and suck it/
slowa/
I'm gettn high while I'm rockin da place/
and makin yo bitch ass a HUGE discrace/
I already fucked ya ten or twelve times/
Why do i have to do it wit my ryhmes/
Yo pussy is so loose/
u pecinito whore/
that even a low class slimeball cant take it anymoe/
u probably costa a dolla for a man or bitch to make u holla/
Dis ryme is gettin weak-a/
u stupid skanky tweak-a/
My beggina ass even beat yo ass/
while I'm smokin my grass
(THAT sucked but hey it was a 5 sec thing,I lost already damn why do i even try???)

lets get votes on this
dont be gay wiht crew or hater votes

I anit got no fuckin crew..anyway i tink u won good job

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo punches were fairly weak on each, I'm gonna go for white dice since dice had some good wordplay.

AAight..

White dice-your verse was aaight try to use more than two rhymin words and expand your vocab. and work on your punches you need it.

Begina-use longer sentences and more than two rhymin words and really work on your flow and punches your post was weak.

V/White

I did it for you now PLEASE drop an honest one on mine its on my signature.

uppin for votes here

beggina mc: well you'z a beginner (so am I) so I really can't blame you
for the shitty verse everything was weak u need a lot longer sentences
cuz it's too short.....and don't say shit like "I already lost" the only reason
your losing is that your not trying just read other people's battle & see what
makes a good drop but just don't bite offa dem....

whitedice013: well you won this yo, every category was better than beginna
mc'z no offense to beginna mc... good drop for you fo real

vote: whitedice013

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126013

White killed it dawg but yo white and everybody else come check this battle
pioneer vs blackmon

yo i already voted but beggina mc wanna vs ya noe just for practice
if so holla at me in private messages

ok,
beggina- u have gotten betta, but yer flow is terrible. not really any good punches.
whitey-u had better flow, but still need work. had alright rhymes

vote- whitey

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